all posts IELTS WRITING 8.5 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev

Bu Writing kurs 5-Maydan boshlanadi! 1️⃣ Kurs davomida Dushanba, Chorshanba va Juma kunlari ertalab video darslar tashlanadi va Seshanba, Payshanba, va Shanba kunlari kechga soat 21:00 dan 23:00 gacha jonli darslar bo’ladi. 2️⃣Kursga qatnashish uchun Writing darajangiz kamida intermediate bo’lsa yetadi: ko’pi bilan esa IELTS Writingdan 7.0 7.5 olib bo’lgan bo’lsangiz ham bo’ladi. ‼️ Kursga qatnashish uchun @IELTS_Admine ga murojaat qilib 100 ming to’lov qilsangiz bo’ldi! @WRITING_T

Some people think it is more important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaining old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? With shifting societal needs and evolving architectural standards, it has become increasingly common for countries to invest in the construction of new public structures at the expense of existing ones, particularly in city centers. I am in favor of this practice. There are several reasons why older buildings should be replaced with new ones. From a practical perspective, the erection of brand-new structures in place of former buildings enhances public safety. Unlike older structures, which may pose risks due to weakened foundations, structural cracks, and outdated materials, new counterparts are designed to adhere to current safety guidelines. Equipped with state-of-the-art technologies, newly constructed buildings often incorporate features such as fire suppression systems, emergency exits, and security monitoring elements. Given the safe nature of these modern buildings, it is justifiable for governments to support their construction, even if this comes at the cost of historical sites. Of equal significance is the focus on environmental sustainability. With heightened recognition of ecological issues like climate change and air pollution, urban development engineers now put a premium on eco-friendliness. Constructed with eco-friendly materials and methods, modern public structures minimize energy consumption related to heating, cooling, and lighting, which can lead to a decrease in greenhouse gas emissions and contribute to the overall reduction of a city's carbon footprint. A case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where an increasing number of public buildings now integrate green roofs and rain gardens, leading to environmentally friendly cities. In conclusion, I support the idea of erecting new public buildings rather than renovating and maintaining old ones on the grounds that it aligns with safety and environmental considerations. Only through the replacement of old structures with modern constructions can strides be made in ensuring public safety and promoting a greener future for our cities. Suhrobjon Abdivaliev @WRITING_T

‼️Agar men IELTS dan 9.0 olganimdan keyin bitta tekinga to’liq IELTS kurs ochsam ham ayrimlar shu kursga ham qatnashmasdi! 🤔Nega bunaqaligini bilasizmi? @WRITING_T

Bu kurs uchun 250 ming to’lov qilib qo’yganlarni hammasiga 150 ming qaytarib beriladi!

Bu Online Writing kursga qatnashish uchun @IELTS_Admine ga murojaat qilib to’lov qilingizlar!

Bu kursga qo’shilish uchun sizlardan nima talab qilinadi? 1️⃣ IELTS dan tayyorlanadigan, darajasi eng kamida intermediate bo’lgan tanishlaringizga ham mana shu kurs haqida xabar berishingiz. Telegramdagi guruhlarda yoke kanallarda odamlarni jig’iga tegib kursni reklama qilishingiz shartmas, shunchaki o’zlaringiz bilgan odamlarga IELTS Writingdan bir oyda kamida 0.5 yoke 1.0 ball o’sishga erishishni kafolatlaydigan atigi 100 ming sumlik kurs borligini aytib qo’ysangiz bo’ldi. Bu Online Writing kursga qatnashuvchilar qanchalik ko’p va faol bo’lsa hali men sizlarga xuddi shunday Speaking yoke Listening va Reading kurslar ham ochib berishga harakat qilaman. 2️⃣ Kursni jiddiy qabul qilingizlar. Kursga boshqa kurslardan arzonligi uchun emas, pulingizni tejash uchun emas, balki boshqa kurslardan yaxshiroq ekanligi uchun va vaqtingizni tejash uchun qatnashing.

✨✨ IELTS Writing qismidan qiynaladiganlar uchun men hali hech kim bermagan imkoniyatni bermoqchiman! ✨✨ Maydan boshlanadigan Writing kursimizga atigi 100 ming sum bilan qo’shilish imkoniyatini bermoqchiman! ✨✨ Bu kursda ham har haftada 6 marta dars bo’ladi nafaqat Writingni oshirish uchun, balki Grammar va Vocabni mukammal darajaga olib chiqish uchun. ✨✨ Eng qizig’i nima bilasizmi? Agar har bir darsga faol qatnashib ham Writing darajangizni har oy eng kamida 0.5 yoke 1.0 ballga oshirolmasangiz shu 100 ming kurs to’lovini ham qaytarib olishingiz mumkin. ‼️ Faqat bu kursda qatnashishingiz uchun sizdan bitta narsa talab qilinadi?!?!

🤔Bir oyda Writingdan 1.5 ball o’sish bu yomonmas menimcha! ✅Agar meni o’zim ham Ripple-effect approach mavzusini yaxshiroq urganib, Recent social changes haqidagi articleni mukammal aktiv qilganimda edi, oxirgi imtihonda Writingdan 8.5 emas 9.0 olsam bo’lardi. @WRITING_T

Writing kurs bo’yicha ertaga sizlarga jinnicha imkon beraman. Adminga murojaat qilmay turingizlar!

✅CEFR candidates are also gaining from our Writing courses! @WRITING_T

🔥BOOOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOOOOM🔥 My friends, jinnicha yangilik bor! Maydan boshlab meni o’zim Samarqanddagi o’quv markazimizda 2 ta Beginner guruh, 2 ta Intermediate guruh va meni o’zimda tayyorlanib allaqachon 5.5 6.0 6.5 olib bo’lganlar uchun 1 ta guruh ochayabman. Dunyo qarashingiz, shaxsiy intizom va hayotingizni o’zgartirishga tayyormisiz? Potensialingizni kashf qilishga-chi?

Assalomu alaykum, guys, leave one of your IELTS essays in the comments section: I will pick up an essay and provide constructive feedback.

⚡️WRITING COURSE⚡️ 📎ONLINE! 📌Tutor: Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev (Writing - 8.5 twice ) 📌Kurs narxi: 250 000 sums. 📌Boshlanish sanasi: 1-may Admin -> @ielts_admine ✔️ Darajangiz kamida intermediate bo'lishi kerak. Writing demo darsi Bizda natijalar gapiradi..☄️ Jafar (Overall 8.0 R 8.5 W 7.0) Farangiz (Overall 8.0 R 8.5 W 7.0) Asror (Overall 8.0 writing 7.0) Muhammadaziz writing 7.0 Muzaffar (Overall 7.0 Writing 7.5) Dilshodbek (Overall 7.5 writing 7.5 Neha writing 7.5 Mutalibov writing 7.0 Shaxruza Writing 7.0 Shohrux writing 7.0 Madina writing 7.0 Gaybullayeva writing 7.0 Tumaris (Overall 7.0) Gulbaxor (Overall 7.0 writing7.0) Ismoilxon (Overall 7.0 Age 15) Fozilbek (Overall 7.0 R 7.0 W 7.0) Shohista (Writing 7.0) Maxliyo (Writing 7.0) Mag'rurbek writing 7.0 Shoxsanam (Cefr Writing 73) Va 4000 dan ziyod xuddi shunday shogirtlar...

Guys, an unusual question! Oxirgi marta qachon zahar ichdingiz? Yoke hech bo’lmaganda qachon aynigan taom yedingiz? @WRITING_T

Writing kurs davomida: Mana shunday uslub, article analysis tashlanadi: 48 soatdan keyin esa jonli dars bo’ladi har bir uslub, structure, vocabni birgalikda mukammal aktiv qilishimiz uchun!

Personality qualities [Analyzed PDF]

PERSONALITY TRAITS!

Fact-based introductions @WRITING_T

🔥Fact-based introductions🔥 🥇DETAILED APPROACH 🥈UMBRELLA APPROACH 📝With the evolution of social norms and family values, it has become increasingly common for individuals, irrespective of their cultural background, to have children when they are older, particularly in urban communities. While this situation can be attributed to the confluence of practical and emotional factors, I believe that it largely represents a negative development due to its detrimental impact on individuals and society as a whole. @WRITING_T

YouTubedagi Writingni 6.0 dan 8.0 ga ikki kunda olib chiquvchi videolardan 10 tasini ko’rgan bo’lsalaringiz hozir Writinglaringiz kamida 25 lar bo’lib ketgandir o’zi😁?

Aytgancha🌚, men Aprelni boshida Writing kurs ochgandim va sizga darajangizni oshirishga kafolat ham bergandim. O’sha kursga qatnashmaganlar bir oyda Writingdan qanchalar yangi narsa urgandingiz🤔?

😁KETGANI KETGAN ENDI😁 Bugun kechga yangi Writing kurs uchun qabul boshlanadi! Kursni birinchi darsi bepul tashlab ham beriladi ishonch xosil qilishingiz uchun! @WRITING_T

A NEW IELTS WRITING COURSE?

I had hoped to gift myself a band 9.0 on my birthday, but my expectations did not fall in line with Allah’s plan. Sometimes what you want isn’t what is best for you. Allah is the best of planners, so trust his decision, remain patient, and express gratitute by saying - Alhamdulillah!

✨✨Alhamdulillah✨✨ ✅ No comments, just a quote Don’t fear failure - not failure, but low aim is the crime. In great attempts, it is glorious to even fail. — Bruce Lee @WRITING_T

Allah is testing my patience!

GUESS WHAT?

‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️ Without watching or listening to such authentic podcasts, interviews, and TED talks, do not even dream of pulling off 8.0+ in IELTS Listening. Your practice tests and student-oriented BBC podcasts do not go a long way in improving your listening comprehension. Not just watching, but analyzing authentic materials in a constructive manner will take your Listening and Reading skills to the next level.

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🔥ESSAY ASSESSMENT🔥 ✅Umbrella approach ✅Domino effect approach 🥇When | if | by | through 🥈Which | thereby | thus 🥉As a result of | as a consequence of @WRITING_T

With the latest advancements in the realm of technology, it has become increasingly common for children to spend a great deal of time playing video games instead of engaging in active physical pursuits, particularly in urban areas. While there are certain benefits to this scenario, its potential drawbacks associated with health and academic performance are much more significant. Admittedly, online gaming offers a wide range of benefits in terms of cognitive development and psychological well-being. When children play computer games like PUBG and DOTA, they have to make timely decisions, solve complex problems, work in teams, and focus on specific missions, which can facilitate the development of essential cognitive skills such as decision-making, problem-solving, cooperation, and attention to details. As a result of these improvements, they are likely to excel in navigating life’s challenges, concentrating on their objectives, and collaborating with others, thereby leading to an improved quality of life. From an emotional perspective, by playing video games with their friends and acquaintances, children can spend quality time together, engage in casual conversations, crack jokes, and uplift their spirits. The more enjoyment they derive, the more easily they can divert their focus away from their problems and responsibilities, thus alleviating debilitating feelings of boredom, stress, and anxiety.

DOMINO EFFECT APPROACH! Play computer games with their friends = spend quality time together, engage in casual conversations, crack jokes, uplift their spirits , have fun = forget about their problems and responsibilities = alleviate feelings of boredom, stress, and negativity. From an emotional perspective, by playing video games with their friends and acquaintances, children can spend quality time together, engage in casual conversations, crack jokes, and uplift their spirits. The more enjoyment they derive, the more easily they can divert their focus away from their problems and responsibilities, thus alleviating negative feelings of boredom, stress, and anxiety.

When children play computer games like PUBG and DOTA, they have to make timely decisions, solve complex problems, work in teams, and focus on specific missions, which can facilitate the development of essential cognitive skills such as decision-making, problem-solving, cooperation, and attention to details. As a result of these improvements, they are likely to excel in navigating life’s challenges, concentrating on their objectives, and collaborating with others, thereby leading to an improved quality of life. DOMINO-EFFECT APPROACH Play video games such as PUBG and DOTA = solve complex problems, make timely decisions, work with teammates, focus on specific missions = cognitive skills like decision-making, problem-solving, cooperation, and attention to details get better = excel in navigating life’s challenges, focusing on their goals, collaborating with partners = an improved quality of life

Umbrella approach [logical organization] 1]Cognitive development [enhance cognitive skills] 2]Psychological well-being [alleviate feelings of stress and negativity ] Admittedly, online gaming offers a wide range of benefits in terms of cognitive development and psychological well-being.

When video gamers grow up, they will be able to build brilliant careers and achieve their goals. When video gamers grow up, they may have the opportunity to build rewarding careers and achieve their goals.

With the advancements in technology, it has become increasingly common for children, irrespective of their socio-economic backgrounds, to spend excessive time playing video games instead of engaging in physical activities. While there are several benefits to virtual gaming, it is important to recognize that its potential drawbacks are linked to overall health and academic performance. With the latest advancements in the realm of technology, it has become increasingly common for children to spend a great deal of time playing video games instead of engaging in active physical pursuits, particularly in urban areas. While there are certain benefits to this scenario, its potential drawbacks associated with health and academic performance are much more significant.

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Assalomu alaykum, guys, birinchi telegramga chatga kiringizlar: agarda telegram qotsa YouTube ga o'tamiz!

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Unda tayyor turingizlar! Essaylarni tekshirib, feedback berib, orqasidan bitta 8.0+ versiyasini ham yozamiz birgalikda.

Assalomu alaykum, guys menga jinnicha idea keldi😁🌚 Bugun ham kechga 21:00 da jonli dars qilib ikki kishini Task 2 uchun yozgan essaylarini tekshirib, qanday qilib 1 ballga oshirish kerakligini ko’rsatib beraymi?

Men bu approachlarni har birini mukammal sinab ko’rish uchun har oy bir marta examga kiraman. Real exam atmosphereda bemalol qo’llasa bo’ladigan uslublarnigina urgataman kurslarda.

✅Listening section 4 from today's real IELTS exam (CD British Council) https://youtu.be/In7MNTTaq_k?si=1ZrpWXoK-oyIKXQ0

✅Passage 1 from today's real IELTS EXAM (CD British Council) https://mini-ielts.com/1027/view-solution/reading/william-gilbert-and-magnetism

A BAND 8.5 ESSAY IN THE REAL EXAM! 🥇Detailed approach 🥈Ripple-effect approach 🥉Domino effect approach 🏅Temporal comparison 🎖️Local exemplification @WRITING_T

In conclusion, I firmly believe that current generations do not have as much quality time as their previous counterparts not in spite of improvements in the field of technology, but because of them. Only through comprehsive technological awareness and digital literacy can we ensure the availability of sufficient spare time.

The progression of technology has reduced not only the quantity of our free time as explained above, but also the quality of it. Gone are the days when individuals came together to take part in meaningful social activities like hiking and camping; today’s screens and technological devices have fostered a culture of isolation. As social media platforms and electronic gadgets have become increasingly prevalent, people of all ages today spend long hours indoors playing video games, binge-watching television programs, and scrolling down on social media. This sedentary behavior not only constrains opportunities for face-to-face interactions but also hinders the development of vital interpersonal skills such as conflict resolution and emotional intelligence. A case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where many prioritize activities like online gaming and social media browsing over spending quality time with their family members and close friends, thus leading to the breakdown of familial bonds and communal ties.

Domino effect approach [result] Social media platforms and electronic gadgets = spend long hours indoors playing video games, watching TV, and scrolling on social media = fewer face-to-face interactions = poor social skills like conflict resolution and emotional intelligence [Uzbekistan: prioritize online gaming and social media browsing over spending quality time with family and friends = family bonds and communal ties

Temporal comparison Gone are the days when individuals came together to take part in meaningful social activities like hiking and camping; today’s screens and technological devices have fostered a culture of isolation.

In contrary to expectations, technological breakthroughs have actually led to a decline in the amount of free time current generations have at their disposal. With the advent of artificial intelligence and automation, both small and large companies have integrated technological tools into their business processes in an attempt to maximize productivity and minimize expenses. Although this shift has allowed corporations to boost their profits and gain a competitive edge over rivals, it has reduced employment possibilities and intensified competition in the global job market. In response to this heightened competitiveness, individuals now feel compelled to work overtime and focus purely on their job responsibilities, thereby leaving them with little time and energy to engage in leisure activities.

Ripple effect approach Limited time and energy to engage in leisure activities [why?] = work overtime and focus purely on their job responsibilities [ why?] = high living expenses and intense job market competition [why?] = reduced employment opportunities = the use of technological tools in business processes = to maximize productivity and minimize expenses = the advent of artificial intelligence and automation. With = as a result of = as a consequence of Given = considering = in response to This, in turn,

With the rapid advancements in the realm of technology, individuals, irrespective of their age, living in the twenty-first century were expected to enjoy more leisure time than ever before, particularly in developed countries. In my opinion, this prediction does not align with the reality of modern life.

It was predicted that people living in the twenty-first century would have more free time than ever because of improvements in technology. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Ovoz yaxshi eshitilyapdimi? Ekran yaxshi ko'rinyapdimi? Boylarni ketmoni uchyapdimi?

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Unda bugun bir soatdan keyin 21:00 da Reading Passage 1, Listening Part 4, va vaqt yetsa Writing Task 2 ni ham jonli ko'rib chiqamiz.

Bugun British Council CD IELTS da tushgan Reading Passage 1 va Listening section 4 ni xoxlaydiganlar yuqmi mobodo?

Guys, what kind of social media platforms do you actively use?

In response to urgent societal and environmental challenges, many argue that it is imperative for all individuals to contribute a certain portion of their earnings to support charitable causes. While there are valid reasons behind this proposal, I take issue with it. Proponents of mandatory donations put forth personal and social justifications for their stance. At an individual level, donating a fixed percentage of one's income to charity can cultivate a heightened sense of social responsibility and civic duty, fostering a profound connection to community well-being. Knowing that their contributions can make a big difference in terms of promoting social prosperity and environmental preservation, individuals may derive a deep sense of purpose and fulfillment, ultimately enhancing their overall quality of life. On a broader societal scale, compulsory financial contributions to charitable organisations can serve as catalysts for empowering marginalized groups, such as abused children, displaced populations, and the homeless. This turn of events not only alleviates social issues of poverty and crime but also fosters social cohesion and solidarity. Despite these arguments in favor of compulsory donations, in my view, imposing such obligations carries more drawbacks than benefits. Firstly, it goes against the fundamental ethos of charity - voluntary giving. Forcing individuals to donate a specific proportion of their salaries undermines the core values of altruism, potentially eroding the underlying principles of charitable acts. Secondly, it is crucial to acknowledge that people already fulfill their civic duties through mandatory tax payments. In a challenging economic landscape where many struggle to balance high taxes and utility bills with basic necessities, mandating charitable donations could compound financial constraints and provoke public resistance. In conclusion, while mandatory donations can benefit individuals and society as a whole, I contend that such governmental mandates run the risk of distorting the true spirit of charity and face public opposition. Only through voluntary acts of generosity and philanthropy can strides be made in transforming the world into a better place to live in. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

“Biz ham bundan shodmiz: bundanda yuksak natijalar tilab qolamiz😁”. Bunaqa gaplarni admin qaydan topadi-ye. Men o’qimagan “ chotki natija gazini bosing” deb yuribman.

✅WRITING-7.0 💥 A reflection of our work ethic and perseverance! @WRITING_T

Endi desertga bitta WRITING 7.0 cha bo’lsa silliq ketadida😁!

✅WRITING 2 BAND IMPROVEMENT! @WRITING_T

Bugun mana shu mavzu tushibdimi real examda?

✅IELTS WRITING TASK 2! 📝I will write and share an almost impeccable essay on this topic a little bit later: before that, you can prepare your own masterpiece to compare your structures, phrases, and ideas with mine. In this way, you can identify areas where there is room for improvement. @WRITING_T

🙏🙏 PLEASE 🙏🙏 Resist the temptation to watch nonsense YouTube videos about how to get an IELTS 8.0 in 2 days.

🔥NICE VOCAB🔥 📝Due to my ambitious personality, I always seek opportunities for personal growth and resist the temptation to stagnate at all costs. 🥇Resist the temptation to = avoid doing things that they want to do but know they shouldn’t. 🥈At all costs = no matter how much effort or price is needed. @WRITING_T

🔥NICE VOCAB🔥 📝 Whenever I become obsessed with spiraling thoughts that sap away my productivity, I pull back, slow down, and recalibrate my mindset. 🥇Sap away productivity = reduce or compromise productivity. 🥈Recalibrate one’s mind = change the way one thinks about life. @WRITING_T

🔥A BAND 5.0 PERFORMANCE🔥 With the rapid advancements in science and technology, it has become increasingly common for scientists to conduct animal research to develop new medical treatments and assess product quality, particularly in developed countries. While opinions on the ethical nature of such experiments vary, I firmly advocate for the continuation of animal experimentation for the greater good of humanity. Proponents of banning animal experimentation cite various reasons to support their stance. When animals are exploited in laboratories to produce and test medicines and vaccines, they are subjected to painful experiments, especially if equipment malfunctions and human errors take place. Given the suffering and cruelty in such scientific researches, animal rights activists argue that it is ethically wrong to cause any species of animals to suffer. Furthermore, advocates for the prohibition of animal testing point out the availability of alternative methods such as advabced computer modeling and in vitro studies that can replace animal experiments. In light of such alternatives, it seems reasonable to consider animal experimentation unnecessary. Despite these arguments against animal experimentation, in my view, it is essential to continue with research involving animals. Using different species of animals for medical and scientific purposes not only facilitates the develpment of innovative medicines but also ensures the safety and efficiency of products consumed by humans. If populations continue to benefit from animal research programs, governments might also increase wildlife conservation efforts, creating a win-win scenario. In addition, animal testing remains an intergal part of science due to its effectiveness and reliability compared to alternative methods. The biological similarities between animals and humans make them irreplaceable in developing and evaluating treatments and products for human use. A case in point is the Covid-19 pandemic when animal testing made it much easier to test the safety and efficacy of vaccines against the virus. In conclusion, while valid concerns are raised regarding the ethical implications of animal exploitation in scientific experiments, I contend that scientists should keep utilizing animals for medical research and product testing. Only through continuous and dependable animal testing programs can strides be made in developing new medicines and assessing their suitability for human consumption. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

✅IELTS WRITING TASK 2! 🏅Animal experimentation @WRITING_T

🔥A BAND 5.5 PERFORMANCE🔥 The bar chart compares five different age groups in terms of their donation rates in Britain during the years 1990 and 2010. Overall, a higher proportion of British people were involved in charitable giving in 1990 compared to 2010. There was also a clear correlation between donation patterns and age in both years, although there is evidence of reversal among older age brackets. Beginning with the younger age groups, approximately 16% of individuals aged 18-25 contributed to charity in 1990, a figure that dropped significantly to only 7% by 2010. The decline was less pronounced among those aged 26 to 35, where the percentage of donors decreased from over 30% in 1990 to a quarter in 2010. As for individuals aged 36 to 50, the proportion of donors breached the 40% threshold in 1990 but later fell to precisely 35%. In contrast, older age groups followed rising donation patterns over the same period. The percentage of individuals aged 51 to 65 who donated money to charitable causes was 35% in 1990, which then saw a minimal increase of 5%. Likewise, the figure for donors in the oldest age category slightly rose, going from over 30% in 1990 to exactly 35% by 2010. Subrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

✅IELTS WRITING TASK 1! 📊Bar Chart! @WRITING_T

The bar chart compares American men and women across different age groups in terms of their salt consumption patterns in the year 2000. Overall, individuals of all ages exceeded the recommended salt intake levels, except for children under 6 years old, with male consumers consistently consuming higher amounts than their female counterparts. It is also clear that salt consumption increased with age, although there is evidence of reversal among older age brackets. Beginning with the younger age categories, boys under the age of 6 consumed approximately 2000 milligrams of salt, nearly double the amount consumed by their female peers. The gender disparity narrowed down in the 6-11 age group, with boys consuming around 3500 milligrams compared to girls' consumption of 3000 milligrams. In the next age bracket, salt consumption continued to rise with age in males, reaching over 4000, while female consumption remained constant. Of particular significance is the 20-39 age category, which marked the highest consumption levels, with men peaking at 4500 milligrams and women breaching the 3100-milligram threshold. In the 40-60 age group, however, there was a decrease in salt consumption, with men reducing their intake to just below 4000 milligrams and women maintaining a level of 3000 milligrams. Interestingly, although older men continued to consume high levels of salt, women in the over-60 age bracket adhered to the recommended salt intake guidelines. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

📊TASK 1 BAR CHART! @WRITING_T

🔥BOOOOOOOOOOOOM🔥 Considering the influence of sedentary lifestyles, unhealthy eating habits, and environmental hazards, many experts predict a decline in public health. I take issue with this prediction on the grounds that a convergence of governmental interventions and individual initiatives is likely to elevate the average standard of public well-being in the years ahead. On a governmental scale, many countries are enacting laws and regulations aimed at enhancing the health of their populations. With a heightened awareness of chronic conditions such as diabetes and cardiovascular diseases, governments are investing in state-of-the-art sports facilities like gyms and swimming pools that are easily accessible to the public. This has resulted in a surge in physical activity levels. In response to the health risks associated with weight gain, nations are also implementing various preventive measures, including raising the cost of fattening food products and launching public awareness campaigns about the dangers of fast food, processed meals, and sugary beverages. In light of this proactive approach taken by countries, I am optimistic that public health will get better, not worse. At the grassroots level, individual actions are making a big difference. To combat non-communicable diseases like obesity, many individuals now take their physical and mental well-being seriously by prioritizing adequate sleep, engaging in regular exercise, embracing a nutritious diet, and maintaining a well-balanced lifestyle. Given the widespread availability of well-equipped sports amenities and healthy food options, they feel motivated to incorporate physical activity into their daily routines and steer clear of poor dietary choices, leading to an improved quality of life and increased life expectancy. A case in point is Uzbekistan, where a growing number of people are taking charge of their health and leveraging advanced sports infrastructure to maintain their fitness levels. In conclusion, given the consistent efforts from both governments and individuals, it is inaccurate to suggest that future generations will experience poorer health outcomes than the ones. Only through a collaborative approach involving robust governmental policies and unwavering individual commitment can strides be made in addressing health issues and promoting healthy lifestyle practices. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

I started writing the essay with my dear ChatGPT-bonu!

Not 500 moons, unfortunately.

Agar mana shu post bu kechgacha 500 ta mana bu qop-qora oychadan (🌚) yig’sa bugun kechga soat 21:00 da shu mavzuga birgalikda 8.0+ lik essay yozamiz! Yuqsa, o’zim yozib tashlab qoyaman!

✅Do you want a band 9.0 essay on this topic? 🤔What if we write it together tonight? @WRITING_T

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Guys, if you send me all the Writing questions that will come out in the real exam, we will write 8.0+ essays together on this channel through live lessons. So, when is the next real IELTS exam?

#13_April_Real_exam_topic With the influence of unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyles, it has become increasingly common for individuals, irrespective of their age, to contend with obesity, particularly in urban areas. In response to this issue, some suggest raising the cost of fattening food products as an effective solution. While doing so is likely to offer a variety of benefits, I firmly believe that a comprehensive strategy involving both governmental interventions and individual initiatives is necessary to deal with this issue. Advocates of raising the prices of unhealthy food items cite various reasons to support their stance. By making fast food, processed meals, and sugary beverages more expensive, we can drive down the demand for these food products. In pursuit of cost savings, individuals may feel compelled to seek out healthier alternatives like traditional meals and fresh produce, leading to a shift towards a more nutritous diet and reduced risk of excessive weight gain. A good case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where many people, particularly those facing financial constraints, refuse to purchase calorie-dense, low-nutrient foods like processed meats and sugary drinks due to the exorbitant prices. However, tackling the obesity epidemic requires a combination of governmental policies and individual efforts. On a governmental scale, it is crucial for countries to invest in well-equipped sports facilities such as gyms and swimming pools that are easily accessible to the general public. Provided with such resources, individuals are more likely to engage in regular physical activity, thereby promoting healthy lifestyles. At the grassroots level, individuals must take responsibility for not only maintaining a balanced diet rich in essential nutrients but also incorporating regular exercise into their daily schedules. Without individual commitment to healthy living practices, simply increasing the cost of fattening food items and improving sports infrastructure may not yield optimal results in curbing obesity rates. In conclusion, while increasing the prices of fattening foods can discourage consumption of unhealthy products, I contend that a holistic approach involving both governmental initiatives and individual actions is essential in addressing the obesity crisis. Only through a combination of quality sports amenities and personal lifestyle choices can progress be made in reducing obesity levels. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

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People have different views as to whether private vehicles should be prohibited from downtown areas of large metropolises to make way for public transport networks. I take issue with this proposal. One of the main reasons why I am against banning cars from city centers is that it would inconvenience many people who rely on private transportation for daily purposes. Individuals with disabilities or limited access to public transit options would find it difficult to commute or run errands if such an idea was turned into reality. Since cars easily surpass buses and trains as a flexible and convenient mode of personal transport, it is unrealistic to expect city dwellers to give up private cars in favor of mass transit. Another key consideration is the potential strain that a ban on private vehicles would place on public transportation systems. Although public transport is an affordable and sustainable mode of travel, many large cities already struggle to meet the demand, particularly during peak hours. Banning personal cars from city centers could overwhelm public transport networks, leading to overcrowding, decreased service quality, and frequent delays. In a world where individuals make multiple commutes daily for school, work, and day-to-day needs, putting immense pressure on public transportation might compound traffic congestion and reduce standards of living. In conclusion, while removing private vehicles from the equation may seem like an effective solution to pollution, depletion of oil resources, traffic gridlock, and accidents, it is important to recognize the potential implications of such a measure. Prohibiting personal vehicles from city centers could not only face public objection but also put added pressure on public transport networks. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

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With the evolution of social standards and improved living conditions, it has become increasingly common for parents, irrespective of their income levels, to purchase their children a multitude of playthings, particularly in developed nations. On the face of it the advantages seem most apparent, but could there be a downside to this devoted style of parenting as well? Proponents of this parenting strategy cite various reasons to support their stance. They contend that a diverse array of toys can stimulate a child’s creativity and imagination. As part of playtime, children engage with a wide range of materials and act out different roles, which can stretch the limits of their imagination. Another argument in favor of this parenting approach is that it encourages social development. Interacting with toys often requires engaging with peers, thereby cultivating essential interpersonal skills such as sharing, taking turns, and collaborating with others. In a world where children are preoccupied with sedentary activities such as online gaming, social media browsing, and binge-watching television programs, encouraging social interactions through toys takes on added significance. It it possible that owning a wide range of toys is any way detrimental to a child’s holistic growth? Even though this is an unusual question, there are some hidden pitfalls. For one, affluent families might spoil their son or doughter with a large number of toys, which can leave negative impacts on the child’s character development. When children grow up accustomed to having an unlimited number of toys, they tend to develop a materialistic attitude towards life, prioritizing material possessions over values like personal fulfillment and purpose. For another, a child’s concentration may suffer if he or she is surrounded by too many things to play with from a very young age. Rather than focusing on a single toy at a time and getting the best out of it, children with multiple playthings might experience feelings of boredom, fatigue, and distraction. Finally, the majority of toys are commonly made of plastic, which is not biodegradable. As demand for plastic toys increases, so does the level of waste, pollution, and environmental degradation. In conclusion, although showering children with a surplus of toys facilitates educational and interpersonal development, it is important to recognize the potential effects on their character development, focus, and environmental sustainability. It is only through strategic planning and thoughful decision-making that parents can raise children who are intellectually advanced, socially adept, physically healthy, and environmentally conscious. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

I’ll write a bit unusual essay on this topic, but at an 8.0+ level as usual! @WRITING_T