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​​So you want to score a band 8 on IELTS Writing? #part2 🆓 1-3 Tips above 4️⃣. Write about what you know You are being tested on the quality of your English, not on the quality of your ideas. So you shouldn’t worry about finding the “right answer”. You need a simple idea that you can clearly describe and justify. 5️⃣. Follow the standard structure To get maximum points, you should follow the standard structure. IELTS Writing task 1 should be written as follows: Introduction: briefly describe what your graph shows. Overview: state main trends. Specific details: describe specific changes, providing data. Learn more about structuring Academic Writing task 1. IELTS Writing task 2 answer should have such backbone: Introduction: rephrase the topic + give your opinion. Body paragraphs: each should have its central idea, which is generally stated in the first sentence. Conclusion: just rephrase your opinion from the introduction. 6️⃣. Don’t write too many words It’s a bad idea to write more than 300 words in task 2 and more than 200 words in task 1. Firstly, it’s difficult for the examiner to read long essays and he/she will check your writing less carefully. Secondly, you are likely to make more mistakes and have less time to check what you wrote. 7️⃣. Choose your writing style Never use informal language in academic writing or in essay. Only in general module task 1 you may be asked to write an informal letter. 8️⃣. Don't learn model answers by heart Do not memorize model answers - you will receive less points for such essay. The chance of getting exactly the same essay as you've learnt is very small. And going off topic will result in achieving a low score. So instead, spend some time learning to adopt advanced vocabulary to make it fit into your answer. This way you'll be able to use various words phrases in different writings and show your broad range of vocabulary. 9️⃣. Don't branch off! Write only according to the theme. Do not include irrelevant information. If you wander from the subject, you'll get a much lower score even for a well-styled answer. 🔟. Write clearly and coherently Do not repeat yourself with different words, avoid being redundant. Also, make sure that each paragraph in Writing task 2 has a central idea. It's very important for IELTS Writing that every paragraph in you essay is clearly separated and has its main thought. This simple thing makes your essay neat and coherent. #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay296 💎 to unite - to join together as a group, or to make people join together as a group; to combine 🏷 ex: If the opposition groups unite, they may will command over 55 percent of the vote. 💎 boundary - the limit of a subject or principle 🏷 ex: Electronic publishing is blurring the boundaries between dictionaries and encyclopedias. 💎 simultaneously - happening or being done at exactly the same time 🏷 ex: The network was broadcasting four games simultaneously across the country. 💎 famine - a situation in which there is not enough food for a great number of people, causing illness and death, or a particular period when this happens 💎 transcends - to go further, rise above, or be more important or better than something, especially a limit 💎 Effect - to achieve something and cause it to happen 💎 capacity - a particular position or job 🏷 ex: in someone's capacity as something She guides tourists at the Martin Luther King Jr. Birth Home in her capacity as a National Park Service ranger. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Ideas about "Gender (Males and Females" ➡️ Gender and Education 🏷 Men and women should have access to the same educational opportunities. 🏷 Males and females should be accepted onto courses according to their abilities. 🏷 It is wrong to discriminate against students because of their gender. 🏷 Gender should be irrelevant in education. 🏷 Students’ achievements should depend on hard work and individual merit. ➡️ Gender and Work 🏷 Men and women should have access to the same professional opportunities. 🏷 Both men and women should be able to pursue a career. 🏷 They should earn equal salaries. 🏷 They should be employed according to their abilities, qualifications and experience. 🏷 Traditionally, women have been restricted to certain roles. 🏷 They were often employed as secretaries or receptionists. 🏷 Nowadays, a range of occupations is available to both sexes. 🏷 Career success depends on individual merit. ➡️ Women’s and Men’s Role in the Family 🏷 Some people argue that a mother should not work. 🏷 She should stay at home and bring up her children. 🏷 The father should be the breadwinner of the family. Others believe that both parents should share these responsibilities. 🏷 Working women can take maternity leave during and after pregnancy. 🏷 Many mothers continue to work after this period. 🏷 Many fathers and mothers share their parenting and domestic responsibilities. 🏷 They contribute equally to childcare, cooking and cleaning. 🏷 Some women may have better career prospects than their husbands. 🏷 Paternity leave and “househusbands” are becoming more common. 🏷 Traditional gender roles are gradually changing. 🏷 Families can divide roles and responsibilities in the most convenient way. P.S: Can we do 🔥 100 reactions, guys? #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay296 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 💡 Answer: It is often said that music has the power to unite and connect people, regardless of their cultural backgrounds or ages. I completely agree with this view, and will give my reasons below. Music can certainly reach across cultural and national boundaries and bring people together. Perhaps the best example of this would be the Live Aid concerts that took place back in the 1980s, and which were broadcast to a global audience. Two live events were held simultaneously in the UK and the US, and the objective was to raise funds for famine relief in Ethiopia. The concerts were a huge success, both in terms of the number of people around the world who watched them and their impact on international public awareness of the famine. They demonstrated, I believe, that music truly is the planet’s global language. Just as it transcends cultures, music also has the ability to connect people from different generations. Regardless of age, we can all enjoy a memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singing voice, and the best songs seem to have the same magical effect on all of us. This would explain why televised music competitions, such as ‘The X Factor’ or ‘The Voice’, are such popular prime-time shows. These programmes attract incredibly broad audiences because singing and popular songs appeal to children, parents and grandparents alike. I would argue that no other form of entertainment can bring families together in this way. In conclusion, I believe that music is unique in its capacity to create shared experiences between people, irrespective of culture and age. ✍️ Total words: 265 📍Band: 7.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔖 California Gold Rush Story There's a California gold rush story that tells of two brothers who sold all they had and went prospecting for gold. They discovered a vein of the shining ore, staked a claim, and proceeded to get down to the serious business of getting the gold ore of the mine. All went well at first, but then a strange thing happened. The vein of gold disappeared! They had come to the end of the rainbow, and the pot of gold was no longer there. The brothers continued to pick away, but without success. Finally, they gave up in disgust. #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

So you want to score a band 8 on IELTS Writing? Many IELTS test-takers spend a lot of time training to write top-notch essays. To achieve a desired score, they stuff their essays with uncommon vocabulary, overuse complicated grammar or write too many words. But are these means really necessary? The answer is NO. There are a lot of much simpler writings that score 8.0 and higher! This is because you don’t need any special knowledge: the examiner will assess your writing, not your thoughts. Even simple but accurately expressed ideas score better than too complicated ones. To succeed in IELTS Writing, you need to - be accurate - write simple things well Ridiculously, even well trained candidates often lose points on IELTS Writing because of making simple mistakes: from going off topic to writing too many words. We’ve gathered top 10 IELTS Writing tips that will help you score band 8+ on IELTS Writing: 🔢. Read the question Understanding what the question asks you to do is crucial for achieving a good score. That's why, always read your question thoroughly and cover all the points you're asked to write about. 🔢. Read what you have written Go back and read the paragraph you have just written before you start the next one. You may think that this is a waste of time. If so, you’d be wrong. It’s important to link your paragraphs together – what easier way to do that than just read what you have written? 🔢. Be clear The practical advice here is to select your best idea and write about that. That means not writing everything you know – leave some ideas out. Don’t worry if it is not your best explanation, worry about whether it is your clearest explanation. Let's collect 100 🔥 to be continued #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay295 💎 wildlife: animals, birds, insects, etc. that are wild and live in a natural environment. 🏷 Example: Development of the area would endanger wildlife. 💎 on the verge of extinction: a very few is left of that species 🏷 Example: Today, many animals are on the verge of extinction. 💎 exaggeration: a statement or description that makes something seem larger, better, worse or more important than it really is; the act of making a statement like this 🏷 Example: There was a degree of exaggeration in his description of events. 💎 To devote smth to smth: to give an amount of time, attention, etc. to 🏷 Example: I could only devote two hours a day to the work. 💎 To expend smth: to use or spend a lot of time, money, energy, 🏷 Example: She expended all her efforts on the care of home and children. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔔 Ideas about "Family" ➡️ Divorce 🏷 In the past, divorce was unacceptable. 🏷 It was considered to be embarrassing for a family. 🏷 People stayed together for religious or family reasons. 🏷 Divorce is more socially acceptable nowadays. 🏷 It has become much more common. 🏷 Divorce can be extremely stressful. 🏷 Lone parents may face financial difficulties. 🏷 Many single parents have to rely on benefits paid by the state. 🏷 Divorce can have a negative effect on children. 🏷 Children from single-parent families are more likely to get lower grades or drop out of school. 🏷 The rise in divorce rates may be connected to some social problems. ➡️ Care for Old People 🏷 Caring for elderly people was traditionally the responsibility of families. 🏷 Adults had to look after their elderly parents. 🏷 A woman’s job was to stay at home taking care of her family. 🏷 Nowadays, fewer elderly people are looked after by their relatives. 🏷 Residential homes provide care for large numbers of elderly people. 🏷 Some families are unable to look after elderly relatives. 🏷 Families tend to be smaller these days, and women often have full-time jobs. 🏷 Care homes provide a professional service for senior citizens. 🏷 Nurses are better trained than family members. ➡️ Care for Old People: Opinion 🏷 The best form of care for the elderly depends on the family situation. 🏷 It depends on whether family members have the time and resources. 🏷 We all have a responsibility towards the older people in our society. 🏷 Governments should invest money in facilities and training for care workers. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay295 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion? 💡 Answer: The protection of wildlife has become a frequent subject of debate with strong arguments for and against. Personally, I believe that humans are paying too much attention and allocating too many resources to this issue, as will now be explained. Firstly, if we allow any species to disappear, this is actually not a disaster. Some people may argue that the biology will be seriously affected if birds and wild animals are on the verge of extinction, but this is an exaggeration. Fossil evidence suggests that the mass disappearance of the dinosaur did not cause any harm to other species on the Earth but merely triggered the emergence of others such as the mammal. Therefore, we should not devote too much attention to the protection of wildlife. Secondly, public money is limited. This means that the national budget should be allocated to more urgent issues rather than expending too much in the conservation of wild animals and birds. For example, more resources should be diverted to medical research to find out remedies for fatal diseases such as HIV and cancer, which may help to save thousands of lives in society. Finally, the government can simply protect wildlife by continuing campaigns to raise public awareness of the protection of wildlife habitats, or impose stricter punishments on activities that may harm wild animals. Any individual who hunts wildlife for food or for pleasure should be given a heavy fine, and this may discourage them from threatening the life of wild animals. In conclusion, while I do not refute the argument for the conservation of wildlife, I believe that it should attract less attention and fewer resources from the public. ✍️ Total words: 276 📍Band: 7.0+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔖 The Bumblebee According to scientists, the bumblebee's body is too heavy and its wing span too small. Aerodynamically, the bumblebee cannot fly. But the bumblebee doesn't know that and it keeps flying. When you don't know your limitations, you go out and surprise yourself. In hindsight, you wonder if you had any limitations. The only limitations a person has are those that are self-imposed. Don't let education put limitations on you.  #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔖 The Bumblebee According to scientists, the bumblebee's body is too heavy and its wing span too small. Aerodynamically, the bumblebee cannot fly. But the bumblebee doesn't know that and it keeps flying. When you don't know your limitations, you go out and surprise yourself. In hindsight, you wonder if you had any limitations. The only limitations a person has are those that are self-imposed. Don't let education put limitations on you.  #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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👋 Hey guys 🔖 Quick writing tip. Some opinion essay questions are written with the wording "Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?" Sometimes in the introduction and conclusion, I see students using 'outweigh' both times to give their position.  This is ok, especially if it's only once, but I think it would be good if we knew a few other ways to say x outweighs y. Here are some options for 'benefits outweigh the drawbacks' — The advantages are greater than the disadvantages — It is better to x than y — x is better than y — give your position in your own way Here are some examples in sentences. People are moving to cities in greater numbers in recent times.  Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  Although this change has some concerns, I believe it is better for people to live in cities. In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  While this change undoubtedly has some positive aspects, I believe this is not a change for the better. In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  Although this change has some concerns, I believe it is generally better for people to live in cities than in rural ares. There you go guys, some options to allow you some flexibility to express yourselves.  By the way, I would say that using the word 'outweigh' is probably a good option in the conclusion because it helps the examiner know that you definitely answered the question.  I just think it is overkill to use this word in both the intro and conclusion.  Also, I just think in general we want to be better writers, so learning other natural ways to express ourselves is always a good thing. Good luck to everyone doing their test. #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🆕 Formal Words for IELTS Writing: Beneficial academic verbs for Writing task 2 🏷 spend time on - devote, contribute to 🏷 to end sth, finish - conclude, terminate, adjourn 🏷 To use - to consume, utilize, apply in calculate the value, judge evaluate 🏷 Work - function look for seek 🏷 understand, tell from - recognize, discern, identify, interpret,absorb 🏷 choose - select, adopt 🏷 give opinion about - comment on 🏷 to live - reside 🏷 pay for sth - afford believe perceive 🏷 make up for - compensate 🏷 buy - purchase 🏷 say - argue, believe, maintain, claim 🏷 to move - to transfer 🏷 suggest - recommend, pose 🏷 to control sth - regulate 🏷 move toward - approach 🏷 combine, match - coordinate, aggregate 🏷 think - assume 🏷 help - coordinate. Provide aid 🏷 take advantage, be useful - benefit 🏷 communicate - interact 🏷 to have sth - possess 🏷 limit, control - constrain 🏷 to be able to use sth - to have access to sth 🏷 write - correspond 🏷 make up of sth - consist of sth 🏷 capitalize on sth - emphasize, highlight 🏷 make up - constitute, involve, comprise 🏷 make sure - ensure 🏷 Explain - justify 🏷 fill - occupy, obsess 🏷 test - assess 🏷 depend on - rely on 🏷 open sth, set up - establish, found 🏷 no have in sth - exclude, remove #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary #part3 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Family" ➡️ Family Size 🏷 Families in many countries are not as large as they used to be. 🏷 We tend to live in small nuclear families rather than large extended families. 🏷 Parents tend to have fewer children. 🏷 Young children are no longer expected to work. 🏷 Nowadays both parents often work. 🏷 It costs so much to bring children up. 🏷 It is more difficult to raise a large family. ➡️Working Parents (also see “Gender” topic) 🏷 Children and their parents seem to be less close nowadays. 🏷 Parents spend less time with their children. 🏷 Women traditionally stayed at home to cook, clean and look after children. 🏷 Nowadays both parents often work full time. 🏷 Children may be left alone, or with nannies or babysitters. 🏷 Busy parents have less contact with their children. 🏷 Many families no longer eat meals together. 🏷 Children spend more time with friends or surfing the Internet. ➡️Negative Effects on Children 🏷 The lack of closeness in families can have a negative effect on children. 🏷 Many parents have no idea how their children spend their time. 🏷 Friends, television and the Internet become the main influences on children’s behaviour. 🏷 Teenagers are influenced by peer pressure. 🏷 Some of them join gangs. 🏷 Juvenile delinquency is on the increase. 🏷 Parents should be more involved with their children’s upbringing. 🏷 Young people need positive role models. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part1 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay294 #Writing #Task1 ☘️ Chart ✅ Q: The flow chart below shows the procedures to get a driving license in US. 💡 Answer: The given diagram details the process of obtaining a driving license in the US. In general, it can be seen that there are three tests that need to be passed in order to get a driving license, which are, an eyesight test, a written theoretical examination, and a practical driving examination. The first thing one needs to do to get a driver’s license is to register in a driving license centre, and fill out the appropriate forms. After that, an eyesight test is required. If the applicant passes this test, he will carry on to the second stage. After paying the required fees, applicants will take a written test and will have two extra chances to retake the test if they fail. Once the written exam is successfully passed, a practical road exam will be carried out. It is obligatory to pass both exams to get the driver’s license. However, if one fails the road examination, they can still get the license by paying the fees again and reattempting both tests. ✍️ Total words: 171 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖 Why Short Stories Are Best for English Learning? You get more time to focus on individual words. When a text is short, you can devote more time to learning how every single word is used and what importance it has in the piece. You can read a whole story in one sitting. Attention spans are very important for learning, and the ability to finish a story gives you more time to digest it. Short stories are designed to give you maximum information with minimal effort. It is best for consistency. It is far easier to read one story every day than trying to read a big novel that never seems to end. You can share them easily in a group. Since short stories can be read in a single setting, they are ideal for book clubs and learning circles. Most of the time these groups do not work because members have no time to read. Short stories are the perfect solution. You can focus more on ideas and concepts. Language is less about words and more about the meaning behind them. If you spend all your time learning vocabulary and grammar, you will never be able to fluently speak a language because you will have little to talk about. These short stories give you the opportunity to understand big ideas in context. #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖Do not rush to finish your essay After writing your conclusion, you might think that you have completed your essay. Wrong. Before you consider this a finished work, you must pay attention to all the small details. Check the order of your paragraphs. Your strongest points should be the first and last paragraphs within the body, with the others falling in the middle. Also, make sure that your paragraph order makes sense. If your essay is describing a process, such as how to make a great chocolate cake, make sure that your paragraphs fall in the correct order. Review the instructions for your essay, and review what you have written. Reread your paper and check to see if it makes sense. Make sure that sentence flow is smooth and add phrases to help connect thoughts or ideas. Check your essay for grammar and spelling mistakes. #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

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🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay293 💎 panic: to suddenly feel frightened so that you cannot think clearly and you say or do something stupid, dangerous 🏷 Example: I panicked when I saw smoke coming out of the engine. 💎 occur: to happen 🏷 Example: When exactly did the incident occur? 💎 commute: to travel regularly by bus, train, car, etc. between your place of work and your home 🏷 Example: She commutes from Oxford to London every day. 💎 tube: the underground railway system 🏷 Example: a tube station #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Environment" ➡️ Impact of Humans on the Environment 🏷 The increasing world population is putting pressure on natural resources. 🏷 Fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out. 🏷 We are destroying wildlife habitats. 🏷 We have cut down enormous areas of rainforest. 🏷 This has led to the extinction of many species of animals and plants. ➡️ Solutions to Environment Problems 🏷 Governments could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories. 🏷 They should invest in renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. 🏷 They could impose “green taxes” on drivers and airline companies. 🏷 Government campaigns should promote recycling. 🏷 Natural areas and wild animals should be protected. 🏷 Individuals should also try to be greener. 🏷 We should take fewer flights abroad for holidays. 🏷 We should take public transport rather than driving. 🏷 We should choose products with less packaging. 🏷 We should recycle as much as possible. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay293 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 💡 Answer: Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents. It might be a good idea to increase the minimum age required for driving because of some reasons. Firstly, since younger people are usually less mature and less responsible with their manners, they might not be aware of the importance of following the rules. Therefore, it is reasonable to ban them from travelling on the street to prevent them from breaking the law and causing accidents. Secondly, as older people are more experienced, they can know how to react quickly to handle dangerous situations on the road, while younger ones might not be able to. To illustrate, if the brakes of a car suddenly stop working, a young driver might panic, and accidents are more likely to occur. However, I would argue that there are much better methods of ensuring road safety. The first one is to have stricter punishments for driving offenders. For example, people who break traffic rules should be required to pay huge fines or be banned permanently from commuting on the street. This makes commuters more likely to respect the law, and traffic accidents can be limited. Another solution is to encourage people to use public transport rather than private vehicles. This can be done by reducing the price and increasing the frequency of buses and tubes to make it more convenient for users. In conclusion, I believe apart from increasing the legal age for driving, there are more effective ways to make sure that travelling on the street is safe for everyone. ✍️ Total words: 📍Band: 7.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 🖥 Essay 1 - 10 🖥 Essay 11 - 20 📌 Essay 21: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. 📌 Essay 22: As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have for the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems? 📌 Essay 23: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support. 📌 Essay 24: A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced? 📌 Essay 25: Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 📌 Essay 26: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what ef ects does this have on animal life and human society? 📌 Essay 27: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050. 📌 Essay 28: In many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved? 📌 Essay 29: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 📌 Essay 30: Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

#tezkor ❗️IELTS o'qiyotganlarga tarqating! — Eng TOP Speaker va IELTS instruktorlar tomonidan 10-26-aprel kunlari BEPUL onlayn marafon tashkil etilmoqda. ⚡️ Respublika miqyosida Eng yirik markazlardan biri Registon o'quv markazi va Xalqaro "British Council" tashkiloti hamkorligida navbatdagi katta loyihaga start beriladi! 🚀 Marafon orqali SIZ Buyuk Britaniya, Amerika, Yaponiya, Koreya davlatlarida tahsil olib kelgan hamda xalqaro IELTS darajasi 9.0 ball'gacha bo'lgan kuchli expertlardan BEPUL darslar olishingiz mumkin. 👉 Batafsil ma'lumot 👨🏻‍💻 Ro'yxatdan o'tish: 👉 @Marafon_IELTS_Bot 👉 @Marafon_IELTS_Bot

#tezkor ❗️IELTS o'qiyotganlarga tarqating! — Eng TOP Speaker va IELTS instruktorlar tomonidan 10-26-aprel kunlari BEPUL onlayn marafon tashkil etilmoqda. ⚡️ Respublika miqyosida Eng yirik markazlardan biri Registon o'quv markazi va Xalqaro "British Council" tashkiloti hamkorligida navbatdagi katta loyihaga start beriladi! 🚀 Marafon orqali SIZ Buyuk Britaniya, Amerika, Yaponiya, Koreya davlatlarida tahsil olib kelgan hamda xalqaro IELTS darajasi 9.0 ball'gacha bo'lgan kuchli expertlardan BEPUL darslar olishingiz mumkin. 👉 Batafsil ma'lumot 👨🏻‍💻 Ro'yxatdan o'tish: 👉 @Marafon_IELTS_Bot 👉 @Marafon_IELTS_Bot

🔖 The Butterfly A man found a cocoon of a butterfly. One day a small opening appeared. He sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could, and it could go no further. So the man decided to help the butterfly. He took a pair of scissors and snipped off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then emerged easily. But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body, which would contract in time. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly. What the man, in his kindness and haste, did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were God's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon. Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our lives. If God allowed us to go through our lives without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. We could never fly! ⚠️ In conclusion: When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. Nothing in life is always smooth-sailing nor goes according to plan, hardships are there to mould us into stronger individuals. Life is constantly about overcoming challenges, it's only through tough times that we became more resilient #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🤫 Confidence Climb Self-doubt means you don’t believe you can get the score you want. IELTS is a staircase to the top of a mountain. Overconfidence means you believe you can get the score you want even though your English is not good enough. You think you’re already on top of the mountain - but you’re not. Confidence means you know that it is possible to get the score you want if you work hard. It will be hard. It will take time. But you can do it if you take it step by step. ➡️ To deal with self-doubt try: 1. Focusing on what you can do - can you write topic sentences? 2. Do the same activity over and over until you are good at it. 3. Watching a video on youtube about ‘Growth Mind-set’ or ‘Grit.’ 4. Don’t measure yourself by where you were yesterday. You won’t grow an inch in a day. 5. Look back at your English work from years ago - then you’ll see the growth. 6. Change your routine - work late at night, drink/don’t drink coffee, work alone/in public, work naked, do new activities - change it up! 7. Relax with English - listen to a song, read a comic, find some memes on instagram. Make English fun again - not an enemy for a minute. ➡️ To deal with overconfidence try: 1. Doing a practice test. 2. Asking someone you trust about your English 3. Doing a google voice search - can google understand you? 4. Reading something from an English newspaper Listening to a Ted Talk 5. Doing a timed writing test and comparing with a sample answer 🔥 Best of luck! Premium users help us to get more boost - BOOST #IELTS_tips #Motive ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🆕 Formal Words for IELTS Writing: Useful academic words ➡️Beneficial prepositions for Writing task 2 🔖 About - Regarding, with regard to, in terms of, concerning, on the subject of, connected with 🔖 Before - prior to, preceding 🔖 After - Subsequent 🔖 By - Through, via 🔖 Under - Below, 🔖 Above - more ➡️Beneficial verbs for Writing task 2 🔖 Keep - store 🔖 feel unhappy - become disappointed, disappoint 🔖 refresh - restore, rejuvenate 🔖 make happen - faster accelerate 🔖 send out - emit 🔖 Begin - commence 🔖 go to school - attend school 🔖 receive education - acquire an education 🔖 Force - oblige, compel, impose 🔖 Want - intend to, plan to 🔖 put up - install 🔖 Try - make an effort 🔖 keep eye on sb/sth - supervise, monitor 🔖 pay attention to - attend 🔖 be keen on, interested in - to be enthusiastic about, show enthusiasm regarding 🔖 Love - show affection towards #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary #part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay293 💎 panic: to suddenly feel frightened so that you cannot think clearly and you say or do something stupid, dangerous 🏷 Example: I panicked when I saw smoke coming out of the engine. 💎 occur: to happen 🏷 Example: When exactly did the incident occur? 💎 commute: to travel regularly by bus, train, car, etc. between your place of work and your home 🏷 Example: She commutes from Oxford to London every day. 💎 tube: the underground railway system 🏷 Example: a tube station #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 🖥 Essay 1 - 10 📌 Essay 11: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 📌 Essay 12: Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 13: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 📌 Essay 14: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 📌 Essay 15: The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world? 📌 Essay 16: Some employers of their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. 📌 Essay 17: With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 📌 Essay 18: Some people support developments in agriculture such as factory farming and the scientific creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 📌 Essay 19: ‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction? 📌 Essay 20: Some people say that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think individual circumstances and motivation should be given consideration. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Environment" ➡️ Global Warming 🏷 Gases such as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun. 🏷 This causes global temperatures to rise. 🏷 This process is known as the greenhouse effect. 🏷 Human activity is a major factor in the rise of the greenhouse gases. 🏷 Factories and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumes. 🏷 Many developing countries are becoming industrialised. 🏷 The number of cars on our streets is growing. 🏷 Cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly. ➡️ Effects of Global Warming 🏷 Global warming will have a significant impact on our planet. 🏷 Rising temperatures will cause melting of the polar ice caps. 🏷 Sea levels will rise. 🏷 We can expect more extreme weather conditions. 🏷 Flooding and droughts may become more common. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part1 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay292 #Writing #Task1 ☘️ Bar chart ✅ Q: The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers. 💡 Answer: The first chart shows the actual and target percentage of buses, from a particular bus company, that arrived at the destination on time, between 1999 and 2003. Meanwhile, the second chart shows how many complaints were made during the same period. It is clear that while the expected target of buses arriving on time decreased over the years, there was no clear pattern in the percentage of buses that actually arrived on time. Additionally, the number of complaints from their passengers increased throughout the period. In 1999, the company’s target of buses arriving on time stood at 86%, which was 1% higher than what was actually achieved. Although the target remained unchanged one year later, the percentage of on-time arrivals dropped by nearly 3%. By 2003, this company had reduced its target of on-time arrivals to just over 84%, while the actual figure had witnessed considerable growth to about 85%. Starting at approximately 7% of total passengers in 1999, the number of complaints made by passengers rose significantly before experiencing a slight decline to just over 8% in 2001. This figure then grew considerably two years later, with about 12% of passengers complaining in the last year. ✍️ Total words: 198 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🖥 Improve Your Grammar For IELTS Writing: ❌ Incorrect: Eating food is important to human, for it provides us energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be eaten raw, cooked or even in a canned form, and it is important to make sure these are eaten in moderation. ✔️ Correct: Consuming food is important for humans, as it provides us with energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be consumed raw, cooked, or even in canned form; however, it is important to ensure they are consumed in moderation. ❌ Incorrect: Society is a complex thing, it is made up of individuals and their different beliefs and values. It has a great impact on us, it shapes who we are and how we interact. ✔️ Correct: Society is a complex thing made up of individuals with their different beliefs and values, which have a great impact on us, shaping who we are and how we interact. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Grammar ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 📌 Essay 1: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 📌 Essay 2: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 📌 Essay 3: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 📌 Essay 4: Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 📌 Essay 5: All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 6: Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? 📌 Essay 7: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? 📌 Essay 8: In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 📌 Essay 9: Companies are responsible only for making money for their investors. Therefore, they should not be held accountable for the environmental and social costs of their business activity to society as a whole. Businesses should do no more than concentrate on making profit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 10: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖 The Dark Candle A man had a little daughter, an only and much beloved child. He lived only for her, she was his life. So when she became ill and her illness resisted the efforts of the best obtainable physicians, he became like a man possessed, moving heaven and earth to bring about her restoration to health. His best efforts proved fruitless, however, and the child died. The father was totally irreconcilable. He became a bitter recluse, shutting himself away from his many friends, refusing every activity that might restore his poise and bring him back to his normal self. Then one night he had a dream. He was in heaven and witnessing a grand pageant of all the little child angels. They were marching in an apparently endless line past the Great White Throne. Every white-robed, angelic tot carried a candle. He noticed, however, that one child’s candle was not lit. Then he saw that the child with the dark candle was his own little girl. Rushing towards her, while the pageant faltered, he seized her in his arms, caressed her tenderly, and asked, “How is that your candle is the only one not lit?” “Father, they often relight it, but your tears always put it out again,” she said. Just then he awoke from from his dream. The lesson was crystal clear, and it’s effects were immediate. From that hour on he was no longer a recluse, but mingled freely and cheerfully with his former friends and associates. No longer would his little darling’s candle be extinguished by his useless tears. 🤫 Author Unknown #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay291 💎 illiteracy - the inability to read or write. ex: Teachers and other professionals are taking part in a campaign to eradicate illiteracy. 💎 advancement - the development or improvement of something ex: All she was interested in was the advancement of her own career. 💎 self-esteem - belief and confidence in your own ability and value ex: She suffers from low self-esteem and it prevents her from pursuing her goals. 💎 impairs - to damage or weaken something so that it is less effective ex: Lack of sleep impaired her ability to think clearly. 💎 take action (collocation) - to do something ex: We must take action to deal with the problem before it spreads to other areas. 💎 crucial (adj): extremely important or necessary ex: Price will be a crucial factor in the success of this new product. 💎 come up with something (phrasal verb) - to suggest or think of an idea or plan ex: They came up with a plan to make us more efficient 💎 invest in smth (phrasal verb) - to make use of for future benefits or advantages, even if it is expensive ex: the British government's failure to invest in an integrated transport system. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​🔔 What Not to Do! 🔗 Don`t Learn BIG WORDS I’ve been told by some professors at my university that the more big words you use in your writing and speaking, the higher band score you’ll get. Time invested in learning complicated terms and phrases will pay off you’ll get a good IELTS score and a round of applause from the examiner. Tempting, isn’t it? But it’s not the best approach. Using big words and complicated terms don’t show that you have a wide range of vocabulary because they are very difficult to use naturally. Instead of applause, you’re more likely to see the examiner rolling his eyes or squinting in confusion. I also figured out that the methods I was using to improve my lexical resource -- sorry! -- my vocabulary, were all wrong. I learned this lesson the hard way working with an IELTS expert. Don’t try to stuff your brain full of words that are as rare and obscure as unicorns. Examiners won’t be impressed. They’ll see right through you and mark you down because your precious big words are unnatural. The real vocabulary to learn. So, what’s the right way to you improve your vocabulary and sound like a native speaker? What works for me now is learning vocabulary by topic. For example, if you want to talk about technology, choose words that people often use: gadget, device, innovation, latest, etc. By doing this, not only can you flexibly discuss specific situations but you can also more easily remember the vocabulary list. I'm sure your score will improve a lot and you’ll feel more confident taking the test! You made a list of vocabulary divided into themes and topics. Good start. But to learn all of them looks like an unscalable mountain. I found a very useful tip on the web about this: You learn/memorize the word first, recite it, then leave it there for some time. After a while, test yourself to see how much you can remember. If you happen to forget something, repeat the process. The amount of information input to your brain will gradually accumulate over time. But don’t fool yourself! Knowing a word is very different from knowing how to use it naturally and accurately. Don’t just learn verbatim from your vocabulary lists. Try to use them on a daily basis to get familiar with the expressions. Make sure those words will march through your mind and out your mouth even though you’re shaking with fear on the test. Then you are sure to earn that richly deserved standing ovation from the examiner! P.S: Good luck on your test! Guys, Keep active in Reactions🫂 #WritingTopTips #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay291 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Two-Part Question ✅ Q: Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take? 💡 Answer: The ability to read and write is considered by many as a basic human right. Nevertheless, all too often, we see that the ability to read and write is not possible for a large proportion of the world's population. This is a serious problem in today's world of the knowledge economy. If we want to ensure growth, we must equip our citizens with the tools they need. There are many consequences of illiteracy. The most obvious is limited access to information. Reading is the most efficient way to obtain information for personal or professional development and advancement. An illiterate person is unable to reach his or her full potential. The second consequence is a lack of understanding of the world. Illiterate people have no way to understand the news they hear on the radio or television. The third consequence is reduced self-esteem. An inability to read and write can lead to feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem. Finally, illiteracy impairs a person's ability to contribute to society. A person who can't read or write is unable to fully participate in society. A person who lacks the ability to read and write is at a great disadvantage in a literate society. To solve the problem, governments around the world must take action. The most crucial thing to remember is that there is no one-size-fits-all fix. Each country must come up with its own solutions for the problem. The good news is that there are many potential solutions. One possible solution is to offer more scholarships and financial support for students. Another possible solution is to invest in education. This could include building more schools or providing more training for teachers. The important thing is that governments should act now to solve the problem. In conclusion, the inability to read and write is a serious problem. It impairs a person's ability to learn, grow and contribute to society. This is a problem that no country can afford to ignore. ✍️ Total words: 327 📍Band: 6.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

💬 Formal Words for IELTS Writing: Useful academic words Beneficial adjectives for Writing task 2 💎 Not present - Unavailable, inaccessible 💎 Producing unusual ideas - Creative, stimulating, visionary 💎 Can be seen, clear - Evident, apparent, conspicuous, distinct, noticeable 💎 Different - Alternative, contrasting, discrepancy, disparate, distinctive 💎 Happening a lot or all the time - Constant, frequent, endless 💎 Trustable - Reliable 💎 Enough - Adequate, fair 💎 Loyal - Committed, dedicated 💎 Essential or important part, basic - Fundamental, integral indispensable, requisite 💎 Relating to money - Financial 💎 Imaginary - Fictional, fabulous 💎 Showing that sth exists - Indicative, demonstrative 💎 Related to understanding or explaining - Interpretive, analytical 💎 More important - Major, significant, cardinal, main, focal, dominant 💎 Needed - Vital, crucial, necessary 💎 Looking the same - Similar, akin, comparable 💎 be reached or done, possible - Achievable, attainable, feasible, manageable, potential 💎 Right - Suitable, apropos, apt 💎 Difficult to understand - Abstruse, complex, byzantine 💎 Certain - Conclusive 💎 Limited - Restricted, ambit 💎 Related, connected with - Relevant 💎 Having good organization - Coordinated, well organized 💎 Done or said in a strong way - Emphatic, assertive 💎 Having good reason for sth - Justifiable 💎 Morally correct - Righteous, principled, upstanding, virtuous 💎 Of or at the beginning - Initial, introductory, primary #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary #part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Education" ➡️Education in Developing Countries: Problems - Children often have to work from an early age. - There are no schools in many areas. - Families do not have access to books or computers. - Literacy rates are often low. - People in developing countries need knowledge and skills. - Education is the key to improving the economy of these countries. ➡️Education in Developing Countries: Solutions - Developed countries could help developing nations by providing money. - They could invest in schools and technology. - They could supply the funds to build schools and pay for teachers. - Children need to have access to free schooling. - Computer equipment could be donated. - The Internet can expose students to a world of knowledge and information. - Governments should make education compulsory for all children. - They should encourage parents to send their children to school. - Governments of developed and developing countries must work together. ➡️Bad Behaviour in Schools: Causes - Bad behaviour is due to a lack of structure and discipline. - There are too many children in some classes. - Large classes are difficult to manage. - Many disruptive students come from an unstable family background. - Other parents are too lenient and spoil their children. - Some children are used to getting whatever they want. - Schools can do very little if they are not supported by parents. ➡️Bad Behaviour in Schools: Solutions - Schools need a clear code of conduct. - Schools need a clear set of rules about behaviour. - They need to create a positive working atmosphere. - Teachers must have the power to punish disruptive students. - Schools should remove difficult children from lessons. - Schools need to work closely with parents. - Discipline could be lacking at home. - Parents must support the school rules. - They should take responsibility for their children’s behaviour. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay290 #Writing #Task1 ☘️Pie chart ✅ Q: The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. 💡 Answer: The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole. It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide. In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively. Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%. ✍️ Total words: 168 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

💬Young Man Lost Opportunity: It’s a story of young man who wanted to marry beautiful daughter of farmer. He went to farmer to ask for permission to marry his daughter. Farmer looked at him and said, “I will allow you to marry my daughter but you have to full fill one condition.” Further he continued and told him condition, “Son go out and stand out in field. A am going to release three bulls one at a time and you have to grab tail of any of three bulls. if you can catch tail of any one of three bulls then you can marry my daughter.” Young man went to field and stood there waiting for bulls to be released. The barn door opened and came out one of the biggest bull he had ever seen. So he decided to let this one go and wait for second bull. So he went over to side and let bull pass through. Again next time barn opened for second bull. This one was bigger and even more fierece than previous bull. This time again boy thought that may be next one could be better choice so he ran to side and let bull pass through. Now door opened for third and came last bull. Boy got a big smile on his face. This was the weakest bull he had ever seen. So he positioned himself and was all set to take on bull and grab his tail. As bull came running by he jumped at exact movement. As he threw his hands to grab tail to his surprise this bull had NO Tail. ❗️In conclusion: Life is full of Opportunities. So Grab the first one. #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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💬 Structure of the #Essay289 ➡️You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So, · Do you agree that all TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues? (or) · Do you disagree that all TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues? Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it. 🔖Question Paraphrased - It is widely discussed that all well-known television shows should attempt to raise public awareness about social concerns. ➡️Opinion - In my opinion, such initiatives by well-known entertainment shows are necessary. The main reason for my viewpoint is that the general public extensively watches all popular entertainment programmes. ➡️A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view. 🔖Body Paragraph 1: ➡️Topic: How TV Programs can help increase awareness about social issues ➡️Supporting points: · Reaches the masses · Subliminally informs and raises awareness · Helps enhance quality of life 🔖Body Paragraph 2: ➡️Topic: Consumed by the masses ➡️Supporting points: · Best method to reach out to people · Ripple effect on society 🔖Conclusion: Reiterated that popular entertainment programmes are the most successful means of reaching and influencing the public by spreading awareness and supported the side taken in the introduction. #Structure #Writing9 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

▶️ Tips to Improve Your Writing Skills 📌 Make writing a daily habit! Of course, practice makes perfect. Make a daily plan, even if it's just a paragraph. Comparing language learning to sports is like learning how to become a professional soccer player after one or two tries and top two scores. Funny, huh?) 📌 Read, read and read more! Many things are best learned through examples. You will learn how to perform multiple styles, develop your own style, and if necessary, "make your own style" of your styles. 📌 In short 🙂 Try not to use complex and long words in your writing. They often confuse the reader and make them less interested in what you have to say. Keep your sentences short. Never use filler words like "very", "really", "just". 📌 Don't forget to edit well! Errors distract the reader from the content of your text. Too much editing. Error editing is possible with online editors like Grammarly. 📌 Develop a clear message! Limit unnecessary words in the text that do not correspond to the content of the text. Check out what he has to say! 📌 Log in and write! Sometimes the hardest step in the process is sitting down and helping. At this point, you should have a clear plan of what you want to say and a general idea of how you want to say it. It can be scary, but remember, the hard work is now over! #WritingTopTips #Writing9 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​#Essay289 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 💡 Answer: It is widely discussed that all well-known television shows should attempt to raise public awareness about social concerns. In my opinion, such initiatives by well-known entertainment shows are necessary. The main reason for my viewpoint is that the general public extensively watches all popular entertainment programmes. Therefore, by communicating a social message, they may educate people about it. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view. These days, entertainment shows are popular among all ages and genders. Suppose TV shows focus on teaching people about social concerns in their communities. Then it's without a doubt that it will reach the masses and subliminally inform and help people become more conscious of the country's problems. Moreover, these messages raise awareness of social concerns such as rising crime, environmental difficulties, and many others that occur on a daily basis and pose possible hazards and threats to people's lives. Hence it allows people to defend themselves and enhance their quality of life. Another aspect to consider is that there aren't enough mediums for individuals to learn about the concerns. Because the publications that usually cover these topics, such as newspapers and magazines, are not regularly read by the general public, especially young people. The best method to reach out to them and pass on information, whether directly or indirectly, is through entertainment programmes. Even if a portion of the show's time is devoted to educational programming, this would have a ripple effect on society at large. In a way, it might also be true that such inclusion would jeopardize the essence of the programs. However, program directors' creativity can assist in delivering the social message while still protecting the program's core in a unique way. To conclude, popular entertainment programmes are the most successful means of reaching and influencing the public. Hence inclusion of social awareness segments is a laudable initiative from the program owner. ✍️ Total words: 315 📍Band: 7.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​💡Ideas about "Education" Benefits of Education - Education gives people knowledge and skills. - People with qualifications are more likely to find work. - They can earn a higher salary. - They can contribute positively to society. - Schools aim to teach young people moral values such as tolerance and sharing. - Schools prepare children to be members of a society. Benefits of Studying Abroad - Foreign institutions may offer better courses. - Many students want to attend a prestigious university. - The best universities employ teachers who are experts in their fields. - Qualifications gained abroad can open the door to better job opportunities. - Living abroad can broaden students’ horizons. - Overseas students are exposed to different cultures and customs. - They become more independent. - They are responsible for cooking, cleaning and paying bills. - They will learn a foreign language. Drawbacks of Studying Abroad - Living and studying abroad can be difficult. - Students have problems with paperwork such as visa applications. - The language barrier can be a problem. - Students have to find accommodation and pay bills. - Studying in a foreign language is challenging. - Living alone in an unfamiliar culture can cause homesickness. Higher Education: Advantages - There are many benefits to going to university. - A degree can open the door to better employment prospects. - Economies are becoming increasingly knowledge-based. - Most jobs require specific knowledge and skills. - Skilled workers are needed for sectors such as information technology and engineering. - Repetitive manual jobs are now done by machines. - Many factories have moved to developing countries. Higher Education: Disadvantages - A healthy economy needs a wide range of workers. - Some manual workers will always be needed. - A university degree is not necessary for many service professions. - Practical training is more important in some industries. #IELTSideas #Writing9 #Part1 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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👋 Hi guys Ⓜ️ Quick writing tip I just want to talk about topic sentences again. The standard way to write a paragraph in an English style for essays is to have one central idea presented in the opening sentence (called the topic sentence) and have all other sentences in the paragraph support whatever is presented in that sentence. In other words, the way to write a topic sentence is to first decide what you want to say in the paragraph. If the purpose of your paragraph is argue in support of an idea, then that's exactly what you should say in your topic sentence. Let me give you some examples. I'll use the topic of 'people have too many choices these days'. I want to support that argument in my paragraph, so here are some appropriate topic sentences. 1️⃣ - 'The increasing number of choices we have these days has significant drawbacks.' 2️⃣ - 'There is more than enough evidence to suggest that people have too much choice nowadays.' 3️⃣ - 'It is clear that there is too much choice these days.' Once I have stated a topic sentence like one of the ones above, I can then go on to show reasons and examples of why I think so. This formula can be applied for any body paragraph. In summary...Decide what the point of your paragraph is, and then clearly state it in the topic sentence. The rest of your paragraph's job is to support the point you made in your topic sentence. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​#Essay288 #Writing #Task1 ☘️Map ✅ Q: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same parl today. 💡 Answer: The two maps show images of a park approximately one hundred years apart. The park has changed almost entirely since it was first opened in 1920. In 1920, the park had a fountain in the centre, and to the west of that was a stage for musicians. There were rose gardens in the north-west and south-west corners, as well as one in the north-east, next to a pond for water plants. In the south-east of the park there was a glasshouse. There were also seats located around the edges of the park. Today, there is little that remains of the original features, except for the two entrances and one of the rose gardens. The fountain has been replaced by a central rose garden, which is surrounded by seats, and to the west there is now an amphitheatre. The water pond has made way for a children’s play park, and the nearby rose garden has been turned into a café. ✍️ Total words: 159 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​📝 Never let one failure from the past hold you back in the future “As a man was passing the elephants, he suddenly stopped, confused by the fact that these huge creatures were being held by only a small rope tied to their front leg. No chains, no cages. It was obvious that the elephants could, at anytime, break away from their bonds but for some reason, they did not. He saw a trainer nearby and asked why these animals just stood there and made no attempt to get away. ‘Well,’ trainer said, ‘when they are very young and much smaller we use the same size rope to tie them and, at that age, it’s enough to hold them. As they grow up, they are conditioned to believe they cannot break away. They believe the rope can still hold them, so they never try to break free.’ The man was amazed. These animals could at any time break free from their bonds but because they believed they couldn’t, they were stuck right where they were.” #short_stories #motivation #Reading 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​💡 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay287 💭 Long-term (adj): continuing for a long time into the future. Example: The longterm effect of education should not be neglected. 💭 To encounter sth (v): to experience something, especially something unpleasant. Example: Young graduates commonly have to encounter great difficulty in seeking employment. 💭 Progress (n): movement to an improved or more developed state. Example: By adequately rewarding the students who have made significant progress in study, the school administration can recognise the achievements of these diligent students to others, encouraging many more students to devote more effort to study to obtain similar rewards. 💭 Peer (n): a person who is the same age, or has the same social position or the same abilities as other people in a group. Example: In some developing Asian countries such as Vietnam, baby girls are usually less appreciated than their peers due to the remnants of feudalism that favoured men more than women. 💭 Overwhelming (adj): too great or large for somebody. Example: High school students in Vietnam, ranging from primary to high school ones, are obliged to learn an overwhelming amount of knowledge at school, not to mention loads of homework and other extra classes. 💭 Inexperienced (adj): having little knowledge or experience Example: Many companies, for fear of arising expenses on training inexperienced new employees, tend to refuse the applicants who have just graduated. 💭 Extensive (adj): having a great range. Example: Society certainly benefits from the intellectual workforce who possess extensive knowledge in scientific areas. 💭 Occupation (n): a person’s job. Example: On the other hand, manual occupations are of fundamental importance to society. 💭 Advantageous (adj): giving advantages or helping to make you more successful. Example: The ability to speak foreign languages fluently can prove to be very advantageous for job seekers in the competitive job market. #Writing9 #Vocabularies #Expressions 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​5 Simple ways to improve your written English 3. Read regularly People often say that we learn to write best by reading. Reading in English is useful in many ways. It is a great way to get an idea of the different styles of writing and see how to use words appropriately. Tip: Choose books or articles with topics that interest you. Learning shouldn’t be boring. Read each text several times to make sure you understand how to use new words and expressions in the text. 4. Improve your grammar Grammar is very important because it improves the quality of your writing. Always use the appropriate tense and remember to use punctuation. Punctuation is a great way to make your writing clear and fluent. Tip: Always proof-read your writing twice. The first time, look for general mistakes and the second time look for mistakes with the particular grammar point your are studying at the moment. 5. Just do it! Writing can be daunting. However, the best way to improve is get a pen and paper or sit in front of your computer and actually write. Be prepared to write several versions of each text because even for professional writers, the first draft is never perfect. Remember, practice makes perfect, so now is the best time to sit down and get started writing. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay287 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Advantages & Disadvantages ✅ Q: Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 💡 Answer: It is true these days that many high school leavers choose to start their work or take a trip before going to university. While a gap year can bring some immediate drawbacks, I am convinced that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for their lives. On the one hand, young students are very likely to encounter several difficulties when delaying their university study. One of these problems is the delay in academic progress caused by spending one year off school. It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision. As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers. Besides, the life out of university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences. On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the positive effects. A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university. Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help them become more mature. When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university straightaway. In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the benefits of a gap year are more significant for the reasons mentioned. ✍️ Total words: 365 📍Band: 7.0+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​5 Simple ways to improve your written English Many people struggle with writing in English and it can seem like a real challenge to improve. Don’t worry, though. Here are some simple steps that you can take to improve your written English and impress people with your writing skills.  1. Expand your vocabulary To express yourself clearly, you need a good active vocabulary. That’s not just being able to recognise lots of words – it means actually being able to use them correctly. Do this by learning new words with example sentences, not just word lists. Tip: When you learn a new word, try learn all the forms of that word and the prepositions that are usually used with it. (For example, rather than just the word ‘depend’, make a note of: to depend on, to be dependent on, a dependant.) 2. Master English spelling You must know how to spell those words correctly. Incorrect spelling changes the meaning of your sentence. For example: ‘bare’ and ‘bear’ sound the same but ‘bare’ means naked and ‘bear’ is a large animal. Additionally, incorrect spelling makes it difficult for the reader to understand what you’ve written. Tip: Practice your spelling using flash cards and test yourself whenever you have some spare time. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​#Essay286 #Writing #Task1 ☘️Mixed chart ✅ Q: The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata. 💡 Answer: It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May. Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May. While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average. ✍️ Total words: 173 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​💡Ideas about “Cities” Reasons for Urbanisation: - People move to cities in search of job opportunities. - Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living. - People migrate to cities from the countryside. - Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays. Negatives of City Life: - Life in cities has its drawbacks. - The cost of living is higher than in rural areas. - Some people do not manage to find work. - Housing is usually much more expensive. - Homelessness and poverty are common in cities. - There is a gap between the rich and poor. - Life in cities can be extremely stressful. - There are problems like traffic congestion and crime. - Cities lack a sense of community. - People do not even know their neighbours. - Cities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”. Pedestrian Areas: - Pedestrian zones in city centres can improve the local environment. - Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle. - Many European cities have built bicycle lanes. - Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity. - People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier. - Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 #Ideas 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​📝 The Four Smart Students One night four college students were out partying late night and didn’t study for the test which was scheduled for the next day. In the morning, they thought of a plan. They made themselves look dirty with grease and dirt. Then they went to the Dean and said they had gone out to a wedding last night and on their way back the tire of their car burst and they had to push the car all the way back. So they were in no condition to take the test. The Dean thought for a minute and said they can have the re-test after 3 days. They thanked him and said they will be ready by that time. On the third day, they appeared before the Dean. The Dean said that as this was a Special Condition Test, all four were required to sit in separate classrooms for the test. They all agreed as they had prepared well in the last 3 days. The Test consisted of only 2 questions with the total of 100 Points:   1) Your Name?  (1 Points) 2) Which tire burst?  (99 Points) Options – (a) Front Left (b) Front Right (c) Back Left (d) Back Right Moral of the story: Take responsibility or you will learn your lesson. #IELTS_tips #short_stories #Reading 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​⛓ Structure of the #Essay285 You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So, · Do you agree with the idea that countries should produce their own goods instead of importing from other countries? (or) · Do you disagree with the idea that countries should produce their own goods instead of importing from other countries? Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it. Introduction: Question Paraphrased - Instead of creating their own food commodities, governments throughout the world are increasingly dependent on food imported from other countries. Opinion - It is, in my opinion, a dangerous trend that will have a detrimental influence on the agricultural sectors of countries. A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my thoughts in detail. Body Paragraph 1: Central idea: Dangerous consequences of importing food Supporting points: · Causes a significant drop in local farms’ crop sales · Deteriorates conditions of local farmers · Makes country depend on other countries for goods Body Paragraph 2: Central idea: Negative effects of food importing Supporting points: · Imported goods are not nutritious · Contains harmful chemicals · Countries have to spend a huge amount on foreign trade Conclusion: Reiterated that imports are not always beneficial and supported the side taken in introduction. #Structure #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​Ⓜ️ Writing Task 2 Sample Answers: How should I use them? Writing Task 2 sample answers are great because they provide a good model for you to compare your writing with. However, simply reading lots of them is not going to make you a better writer. Think about it this way, how many millions of people watch world-class footballers like Messi and Ronaldo every week? Does it improve their football skills? Maybe if they go and practice what they learned, but not a bit if they do nothing. In order to really improve you have to actively use the Writing Task 2 sample answer below, not passively read them and then expect to magically improve. Follow the plan of action below. Plan of Action 1. Read the questions, but DO NOT read the sample answers. Even taking a brief look at the question will influence your answer. 2. Attempt the answer under exam conditions. 3. Compare what you have with the sample answer. 4. Think about the ideas, the structure, the organisation, vocabulary, and grammar. It is important that you really think deeply about how the author used each of the elements above. 5. Don’t worry if your answer is very different. There are many different ways to answer a Task 2 question. 6. Go back and improve your original answer with some of the elements of the Writing Task 2 sample answer. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 #Task2 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay285 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Opinion ✅ Q: Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend? 💡 Answer: Instead of creating their own food commodities, governments throughout the world are increasingly dependent on food imported from other countries. It is, in my opinion, a dangerous trend that will have a detrimental influence on the agricultural sectors of countries. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my thoughts in detail. The disadvantage of depending on imported commodities rather than indigenous goods is that all local farmers in the nation who rely on crop sales would see a significant drop, lowering their living conditions. As a result, agricultural workers may need to seek alternative employment opportunities. Moreover, during times of crisis, nations that import products on a large scale will stop doing so, causing other countries that buy these items to suffer greatly. Additionally, imported food is not necessarily nutritious. To preserve the food while it is transported to other parts of the world, specific chemicals are added to it. These preservatives have been linked to the development of deadly illnesses such as cancer. In addition, failing to maintain storage facilities results in significant food waste. Moreover, countries have to spend a huge amount to foreign countries in trade, and imported food is overpriced. It also has a negative impact on the nations' native cultures. In Japan, for example, where imported meals are growing more popular, people's knowledge of their own indigenous cuisines is dwindling. However, in a way, it might also be true that importing goods can provide access to some foods that would otherwise be unavailable in certain countries. Preserved foods kept for extended periods, on the other hand, can induce a range of illnesses. To summarise, imports are not always beneficial, and they have a negative influence on the country's agriculture sector, weakening the country's economic position. ✍️ Total words: 290 📍Band: 7.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​💡 Ideas about Advertising Positives of Advertising: - Advertising is a key part of modern business. - Companies need to tell customers about their products. - Advertisements inform us about the choices we have. - Advertising is a creative industry that employs many people. - Without advertising we would have less choice. - Without advertising there would be higher unemployment. - Advertising is a form of modern art. - People enjoy adverts. Negatives of Advertising: -Advertising manipulates people. - It aims to persuade people that buying a product will make them happier. - Advertisers focus on selling a brand image. - They use glamorous, successful people. - We now live in a consumer culture. - We are persuaded to follow the latest trends. - We are encouraged to associate certain brands with a higher status. - Advertisers often aim their marketing at children. - Children can easily be influenced by advertisements. - Children put pressure on parents to buy them things. Opinions about Advertising: - Advertising should be regulated. - Advertising aimed at children should be controlled or even banned. - Unhealthy foods should not be marketed in a way that attracts children. - Products that can be a risk to health should display warnings. - In some countries it is illegal to advertise cigarettes on television. - Warnings must be displayed on cigarette packets. - However, advertising is necessary in free market economies. - It creates demand for products. - Governments should only censor false information or products that are harmful. #IELTSTopTips #Writing9 #Ideas 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay284 #Writing #Task1 ☘️Bar chart ✅ Q: The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. 💡 Answer: The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games. It is clear that the USA is by far the most successful Olympic medal winning nation. It is also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be fairly similar. The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. In second place on the all-time medals chart is the Soviet Union, with just over 1,000 medals. Again, the number of gold medals won by this country is slightly higher than the number of silver or bronze medals. Only four other countries - the UK, France, Germany and Italy - have won more than 500 Olympic medals, all with similar proportions of each medal colour. Apart from the USA and the Soviet Union, China is the only other country with a noticeably higher proportion of gold medals (about 200) compared to silver and bronze (about 100 each). ✍️ Total words: 178 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​📝 A Short Story on Self Confidence There was a business executive who was deep in debt and could see no way out. Creditors were closing in on him. Suppliers were demanding payment. He sat on the park bench, head in hands, wondering if anything could save his company from bankruptcy. Suddenly an old man appeared before him. “I can see that something is troubling you,” he said. After listening to the executive’s woes, the old man said, “I believe I can help you.” He asked the man his name, wrote out a check, and pushed it into his hand saying, “Take this money. Meet me here exactly one year from today, and you can pay me back at that time.” Then he turned and disappeared as quickly as he had come. The business executive saw in his hand a check for $500,000, signed by John D. Rockefeller, then one of the richest men in the world! “I can erase my money worries in an instant!” he realized. But instead, the executive decided to put the uncashed check in his safe. Just knowing it was there might give him the strength to work out a way to save his business, he thought. With renewed optimism, he negotiated better deals and extended terms of payment. He closed several big sales. Within a few months, he was out of debt and making money once again. Exactly one year later, he returned to the park with the uncashed check. At the agreed-upon time, the old man appeared. But just as the executive was about to hand back the check and share his success story, a nurse came running up and grabbed the old man. “I’m so glad I caught him!” she cried. “I hope he hasn’t been bothering you. He’s always escaping from the rest home and telling people he’s John D. Rockefeller.” And she led the old man away by the arm. The astonished executive just stood there, stunned. All year long he’d been wheeling and dealing, buying and selling, convinced he had half a million dollars behind him. Suddenly, he realized that it wasn’t the money, real or imagined, that had turned his life around. It was his newfound self-confidence that gave him the power to achieve anything he went after. #IELTS_tips #short_stories #Reading 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​Ⓜ️ Hi guys! Have you tried to run a marathon with no practice? I hope not. You might pull a muscle. You need to start small in order to achieve something big like that. When it comes to learning English, what if I told you that you can understand big ideas with just a little bit of text? You do not need to wait several years to deal with complex concepts. Just because you are learning a language does not mean you need to limit your thinking. Stories are all about going beyond reality. It is no wonder that they let you understand big concepts with only a little bit of reading practice. But this works better when you’re reading better stories. I am talking about award-winning short stories, told using language easily understood by beginners. These will not only improve your English reading comprehension but also open your mind to different worlds. 🔰 Why Short Stories Are Best for English Learning You get more time to focus on individual words. When a text is short, you can devote more time to learning how every single word is used and what importance it has in the piece. You can read a whole story in one sitting. Attention spans are very important for learning, and the ability to finish a story gives you more time to digest it. Short stories are designed to give you maximum information with minimal effort. It is best for consistency. It is far easier to read one story every day than trying to read a big novel that never seems to end. You can share them easily in a group. Since short stories can be read in a single setting, they are ideal for book clubs and learning circles. Most of the time these groups do not work because members have no time to read. Short stories are the perfect solution. You can focus more on ideas and concepts. Language is less about words and more about the meaning behind them. If you spend all your time learning vocabulary and grammar, you will never be able to fluently speak a language because you will have little to talk about. These short stories give you the opportunity to understand big ideas in context. #IELTS_tips #short_stories #Reading 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​⛓ Structure of the #Essay283 You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So, · Do you agree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces? (or) · Do you disagree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces? Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it. Question Paraphrased - As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces. Opinion - In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health. A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail. Body Paragraph 1: Central idea: Benefits of public outdoor areas Supporting points: · Important, not only for aesthetic reasons · Provides opportunities to engage with other people · Improves quality of life Body Paragraph 2: Central idea: Ways outdoor spaces promotes tourism Supporting points: · Enhances area’s natural beauty · Boosts tourism · Promotes economic development Conclusion: Reiterated that investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism and supported the side taken in introduction. #Structure #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay283 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree/Disagree ✅ Q: Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 💡 Answer: As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces. In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail. Primarily, as we are moving towards development, the demand for outdoor public space is also doubling. Outdoor public places are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for people to connect with nature and other people. It also allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities, such as the famous Lodhi Garden of Delhi. This park helps appreciate the beauty of the town while also providing opportunities for people from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health. Besides that, outdoor spaces also help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area's natural beauty. New York City's Central Park is a classic example. The city was well-known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of Central Park not only allowed locals to participate in a variety of activities but also attracted non-business visitors from all over the world. However, some people think that spending too much money on outdoor spaces is a complete waste of money. But it is also equally true that we cannot overlook the reality of the growing demand for fresh air and greenery. In conclusion, investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism. Authorities should allocate a well-balanced budget based on the needs of the city's growth. ✍️ Total words: 300 📍Band: 7.0+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​⛓ Structure of the #Essay282 You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So, · Do you agree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing? (or) · Do you disagree that it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing? Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it. Don’t forget to state your opinion on it. Question Paraphrased - The issue of utilization of the open areas for planting or building more houses has grown to become a debatable issue. Opinion - In my opinion, I agree that trees and gardens play a vital role in human development. A thesis statement - In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons. Body Paragraph 1: Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses Supporting points: · Promotes aesthetics of the city · Provides opportunities to engage with other people · Improves quality of life and give more relaxing environment Body Paragraph 2: Central idea: Benefits of planting trees over building houses Supporting points: · Improves air and noise quality · Absorbers carbon dioxide and dust Conclusion: Reiterated that due to mass urbanization, the need for trees and gardens has drastically increased and supported the side taken in introduction. #Structure #Writing9 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​Ⓜ️ IELTS Writing Task 1 Tip In written reports we don't normally describe statistics using exact numbers as this can be very boring and distracting for the reader. Instead we use approximation to round numbers up or down. Elicit different ways of describing the following numbers: 134,575: just over 135,000, approximately/roughly/around/about 135,000; 134,575 compared to 396,530: over triple, around 200% more, about three times as many, roughly 260,000 more, about a third as many, approximately one in three, far more, for less. Ⓜ️ Writing Task 1 Essay Sample You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Model answer The graph shows how the populations of India and China have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future. In 2000, there were more people living in China than in India. The number of Chinese was 1.25 billion, while India's population was about 1 billion. Between 2000 and 2010, there has been a 0.2 billion rise in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period, China's population has increased by 0.1 billion to reach over 1.35 billion. According to the graph, the population in India will increase more quickly than in China, and experts say that by 2030, both countries will have the same population of 1.45 billion. After this, China's population is likely to fall slightly to 1.4 billion in 2050, while India's population will probably increase and reach 1.6 billion. Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience steady growth in its population and it will overtake China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall. ✍️ Total words: 173 📍Band: 6.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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