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🔖 The Bumblebee According to scientists, the bumblebee's body is too heavy and its wing span too small. Aerodynamically, the bumblebee cannot fly. But the bumblebee doesn't know that and it keeps flying. When you don't know your limitations, you go out and surprise yourself. In hindsight, you wonder if you had any limitations. The only limitations a person has are those that are self-imposed. Don't let education put limitations on you.  #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔖 The Bumblebee According to scientists, the bumblebee's body is too heavy and its wing span too small. Aerodynamically, the bumblebee cannot fly. But the bumblebee doesn't know that and it keeps flying. When you don't know your limitations, you go out and surprise yourself. In hindsight, you wonder if you had any limitations. The only limitations a person has are those that are self-imposed. Don't let education put limitations on you.  #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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👋 Hey guys 🔖 Quick writing tip. Some opinion essay questions are written with the wording "Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?" Sometimes in the introduction and conclusion, I see students using 'outweigh' both times to give their position.  This is ok, especially if it's only once, but I think it would be good if we knew a few other ways to say x outweighs y. Here are some options for 'benefits outweigh the drawbacks' — The advantages are greater than the disadvantages — It is better to x than y — x is better than y — give your position in your own way Here are some examples in sentences. People are moving to cities in greater numbers in recent times.  Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  Although this change has some concerns, I believe it is better for people to live in cities. In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  While this change undoubtedly has some positive aspects, I believe this is not a change for the better. In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of people moving from rural areas to cities.  Although this change has some concerns, I believe it is generally better for people to live in cities than in rural ares. There you go guys, some options to allow you some flexibility to express yourselves.  By the way, I would say that using the word 'outweigh' is probably a good option in the conclusion because it helps the examiner know that you definitely answered the question.  I just think it is overkill to use this word in both the intro and conclusion.  Also, I just think in general we want to be better writers, so learning other natural ways to express ourselves is always a good thing. Good luck to everyone doing their test. #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🆕 Formal Words for IELTS Writing: Beneficial academic verbs for Writing task 2 🏷 spend time on - devote, contribute to 🏷 to end sth, finish - conclude, terminate, adjourn 🏷 To use - to consume, utilize, apply in calculate the value, judge evaluate 🏷 Work - function look for seek 🏷 understand, tell from - recognize, discern, identify, interpret,absorb 🏷 choose - select, adopt 🏷 give opinion about - comment on 🏷 to live - reside 🏷 pay for sth - afford believe perceive 🏷 make up for - compensate 🏷 buy - purchase 🏷 say - argue, believe, maintain, claim 🏷 to move - to transfer 🏷 suggest - recommend, pose 🏷 to control sth - regulate 🏷 move toward - approach 🏷 combine, match - coordinate, aggregate 🏷 think - assume 🏷 help - coordinate. Provide aid 🏷 take advantage, be useful - benefit 🏷 communicate - interact 🏷 to have sth - possess 🏷 limit, control - constrain 🏷 to be able to use sth - to have access to sth 🏷 write - correspond 🏷 make up of sth - consist of sth 🏷 capitalize on sth - emphasize, highlight 🏷 make up - constitute, involve, comprise 🏷 make sure - ensure 🏷 Explain - justify 🏷 fill - occupy, obsess 🏷 test - assess 🏷 depend on - rely on 🏷 open sth, set up - establish, found 🏷 no have in sth - exclude, remove #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary #part3 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Family" ➡️ Family Size 🏷 Families in many countries are not as large as they used to be. 🏷 We tend to live in small nuclear families rather than large extended families. 🏷 Parents tend to have fewer children. 🏷 Young children are no longer expected to work. 🏷 Nowadays both parents often work. 🏷 It costs so much to bring children up. 🏷 It is more difficult to raise a large family. ➡️Working Parents (also see “Gender” topic) 🏷 Children and their parents seem to be less close nowadays. 🏷 Parents spend less time with their children. 🏷 Women traditionally stayed at home to cook, clean and look after children. 🏷 Nowadays both parents often work full time. 🏷 Children may be left alone, or with nannies or babysitters. 🏷 Busy parents have less contact with their children. 🏷 Many families no longer eat meals together. 🏷 Children spend more time with friends or surfing the Internet. ➡️Negative Effects on Children 🏷 The lack of closeness in families can have a negative effect on children. 🏷 Many parents have no idea how their children spend their time. 🏷 Friends, television and the Internet become the main influences on children’s behaviour. 🏷 Teenagers are influenced by peer pressure. 🏷 Some of them join gangs. 🏷 Juvenile delinquency is on the increase. 🏷 Parents should be more involved with their children’s upbringing. 🏷 Young people need positive role models. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part1 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay294 #Writing #Task1 ☘️ Chart ✅ Q: The flow chart below shows the procedures to get a driving license in US. 💡 Answer: The given diagram details the process of obtaining a driving license in the US. In general, it can be seen that there are three tests that need to be passed in order to get a driving license, which are, an eyesight test, a written theoretical examination, and a practical driving examination. The first thing one needs to do to get a driver’s license is to register in a driving license centre, and fill out the appropriate forms. After that, an eyesight test is required. If the applicant passes this test, he will carry on to the second stage. After paying the required fees, applicants will take a written test and will have two extra chances to retake the test if they fail. Once the written exam is successfully passed, a practical road exam will be carried out. It is obligatory to pass both exams to get the driver’s license. However, if one fails the road examination, they can still get the license by paying the fees again and reattempting both tests. ✍️ Total words: 171 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖 Why Short Stories Are Best for English Learning? You get more time to focus on individual words. When a text is short, you can devote more time to learning how every single word is used and what importance it has in the piece. You can read a whole story in one sitting. Attention spans are very important for learning, and the ability to finish a story gives you more time to digest it. Short stories are designed to give you maximum information with minimal effort. It is best for consistency. It is far easier to read one story every day than trying to read a big novel that never seems to end. You can share them easily in a group. Since short stories can be read in a single setting, they are ideal for book clubs and learning circles. Most of the time these groups do not work because members have no time to read. Short stories are the perfect solution. You can focus more on ideas and concepts. Language is less about words and more about the meaning behind them. If you spend all your time learning vocabulary and grammar, you will never be able to fluently speak a language because you will have little to talk about. These short stories give you the opportunity to understand big ideas in context. #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖Do not rush to finish your essay After writing your conclusion, you might think that you have completed your essay. Wrong. Before you consider this a finished work, you must pay attention to all the small details. Check the order of your paragraphs. Your strongest points should be the first and last paragraphs within the body, with the others falling in the middle. Also, make sure that your paragraph order makes sense. If your essay is describing a process, such as how to make a great chocolate cake, make sure that your paragraphs fall in the correct order. Review the instructions for your essay, and review what you have written. Reread your paper and check to see if it makes sense. Make sure that sentence flow is smooth and add phrases to help connect thoughts or ideas. Check your essay for grammar and spelling mistakes. #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

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🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay293 💎 panic: to suddenly feel frightened so that you cannot think clearly and you say or do something stupid, dangerous 🏷 Example: I panicked when I saw smoke coming out of the engine. 💎 occur: to happen 🏷 Example: When exactly did the incident occur? 💎 commute: to travel regularly by bus, train, car, etc. between your place of work and your home 🏷 Example: She commutes from Oxford to London every day. 💎 tube: the underground railway system 🏷 Example: a tube station #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Environment" ➡️ Impact of Humans on the Environment 🏷 The increasing world population is putting pressure on natural resources. 🏷 Fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out. 🏷 We are destroying wildlife habitats. 🏷 We have cut down enormous areas of rainforest. 🏷 This has led to the extinction of many species of animals and plants. ➡️ Solutions to Environment Problems 🏷 Governments could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories. 🏷 They should invest in renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. 🏷 They could impose “green taxes” on drivers and airline companies. 🏷 Government campaigns should promote recycling. 🏷 Natural areas and wild animals should be protected. 🏷 Individuals should also try to be greener. 🏷 We should take fewer flights abroad for holidays. 🏷 We should take public transport rather than driving. 🏷 We should choose products with less packaging. 🏷 We should recycle as much as possible. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay293 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 💡 Answer: Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents. It might be a good idea to increase the minimum age required for driving because of some reasons. Firstly, since younger people are usually less mature and less responsible with their manners, they might not be aware of the importance of following the rules. Therefore, it is reasonable to ban them from travelling on the street to prevent them from breaking the law and causing accidents. Secondly, as older people are more experienced, they can know how to react quickly to handle dangerous situations on the road, while younger ones might not be able to. To illustrate, if the brakes of a car suddenly stop working, a young driver might panic, and accidents are more likely to occur. However, I would argue that there are much better methods of ensuring road safety. The first one is to have stricter punishments for driving offenders. For example, people who break traffic rules should be required to pay huge fines or be banned permanently from commuting on the street. This makes commuters more likely to respect the law, and traffic accidents can be limited. Another solution is to encourage people to use public transport rather than private vehicles. This can be done by reducing the price and increasing the frequency of buses and tubes to make it more convenient for users. In conclusion, I believe apart from increasing the legal age for driving, there are more effective ways to make sure that travelling on the street is safe for everyone. ✍️ Total words: 📍Band: 7.5+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 🖥 Essay 1 - 10 🖥 Essay 11 - 20 📌 Essay 21: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. 📌 Essay 22: As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have for the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems? 📌 Essay 23: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support. 📌 Essay 24: A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced? 📌 Essay 25: Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 📌 Essay 26: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what ef ects does this have on animal life and human society? 📌 Essay 27: Column chart - The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050. 📌 Essay 28: In many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved? 📌 Essay 29: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 📌 Essay 30: Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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🔖 The Butterfly A man found a cocoon of a butterfly. One day a small opening appeared. He sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could, and it could go no further. So the man decided to help the butterfly. He took a pair of scissors and snipped off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then emerged easily. But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body, which would contract in time. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly. What the man, in his kindness and haste, did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were God's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon. Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our lives. If God allowed us to go through our lives without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. We could never fly! ⚠️ In conclusion: When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. Nothing in life is always smooth-sailing nor goes according to plan, hardships are there to mould us into stronger individuals. Life is constantly about overcoming challenges, it's only through tough times that we became more resilient #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🤫 Confidence Climb Self-doubt means you don’t believe you can get the score you want. IELTS is a staircase to the top of a mountain. Overconfidence means you believe you can get the score you want even though your English is not good enough. You think you’re already on top of the mountain - but you’re not. Confidence means you know that it is possible to get the score you want if you work hard. It will be hard. It will take time. But you can do it if you take it step by step. ➡️ To deal with self-doubt try: 1. Focusing on what you can do - can you write topic sentences? 2. Do the same activity over and over until you are good at it. 3. Watching a video on youtube about ‘Growth Mind-set’ or ‘Grit.’ 4. Don’t measure yourself by where you were yesterday. You won’t grow an inch in a day. 5. Look back at your English work from years ago - then you’ll see the growth. 6. Change your routine - work late at night, drink/don’t drink coffee, work alone/in public, work naked, do new activities - change it up! 7. Relax with English - listen to a song, read a comic, find some memes on instagram. Make English fun again - not an enemy for a minute. ➡️ To deal with overconfidence try: 1. Doing a practice test. 2. Asking someone you trust about your English 3. Doing a google voice search - can google understand you? 4. Reading something from an English newspaper Listening to a Ted Talk 5. Doing a timed writing test and comparing with a sample answer 🔥 Best of luck! Premium users help us to get more boost - BOOST #IELTS_tips #Motive ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🆕 Formal Words for IELTS Writing: Useful academic words ➡️Beneficial prepositions for Writing task 2 🔖 About - Regarding, with regard to, in terms of, concerning, on the subject of, connected with 🔖 Before - prior to, preceding 🔖 After - Subsequent 🔖 By - Through, via 🔖 Under - Below, 🔖 Above - more ➡️Beneficial verbs for Writing task 2 🔖 Keep - store 🔖 feel unhappy - become disappointed, disappoint 🔖 refresh - restore, rejuvenate 🔖 make happen - faster accelerate 🔖 send out - emit 🔖 Begin - commence 🔖 go to school - attend school 🔖 receive education - acquire an education 🔖 Force - oblige, compel, impose 🔖 Want - intend to, plan to 🔖 put up - install 🔖 Try - make an effort 🔖 keep eye on sb/sth - supervise, monitor 🔖 pay attention to - attend 🔖 be keen on, interested in - to be enthusiastic about, show enthusiasm regarding 🔖 Love - show affection towards #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary #part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay293 💎 panic: to suddenly feel frightened so that you cannot think clearly and you say or do something stupid, dangerous 🏷 Example: I panicked when I saw smoke coming out of the engine. 💎 occur: to happen 🏷 Example: When exactly did the incident occur? 💎 commute: to travel regularly by bus, train, car, etc. between your place of work and your home 🏷 Example: She commutes from Oxford to London every day. 💎 tube: the underground railway system 🏷 Example: a tube station #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 🖥 Essay 1 - 10 📌 Essay 11: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 📌 Essay 12: Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 13: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 📌 Essay 14: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 📌 Essay 15: The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world? 📌 Essay 16: Some employers of their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. 📌 Essay 17: With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 📌 Essay 18: Some people support developments in agriculture such as factory farming and the scientific creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 📌 Essay 19: ‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction? 📌 Essay 20: Some people say that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think individual circumstances and motivation should be given consideration. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔔Ideas about "Environment" ➡️ Global Warming 🏷 Gases such as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun. 🏷 This causes global temperatures to rise. 🏷 This process is known as the greenhouse effect. 🏷 Human activity is a major factor in the rise of the greenhouse gases. 🏷 Factories and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumes. 🏷 Many developing countries are becoming industrialised. 🏷 The number of cars on our streets is growing. 🏷 Cheap air travel is allowing more people to fly. ➡️ Effects of Global Warming 🏷 Global warming will have a significant impact on our planet. 🏷 Rising temperatures will cause melting of the polar ice caps. 🏷 Sea levels will rise. 🏷 We can expect more extreme weather conditions. 🏷 Flooding and droughts may become more common. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part1 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

​​#Essay292 #Writing #Task1 ☘️ Bar chart ✅ Q: The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers. 💡 Answer: The first chart shows the actual and target percentage of buses, from a particular bus company, that arrived at the destination on time, between 1999 and 2003. Meanwhile, the second chart shows how many complaints were made during the same period. It is clear that while the expected target of buses arriving on time decreased over the years, there was no clear pattern in the percentage of buses that actually arrived on time. Additionally, the number of complaints from their passengers increased throughout the period. In 1999, the company’s target of buses arriving on time stood at 86%, which was 1% higher than what was actually achieved. Although the target remained unchanged one year later, the percentage of on-time arrivals dropped by nearly 3%. By 2003, this company had reduced its target of on-time arrivals to just over 84%, while the actual figure had witnessed considerable growth to about 85%. Starting at approximately 7% of total passengers in 1999, the number of complaints made by passengers rose significantly before experiencing a slight decline to just over 8% in 2001. This figure then grew considerably two years later, with about 12% of passengers complaining in the last year. ✍️ Total words: 198 📍Band: ♻️ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🖥 Improve Your Grammar For IELTS Writing: ❌ Incorrect: Eating food is important to human, for it provides us energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be eaten raw, cooked or even in a canned form, and it is important to make sure these are eaten in moderation. ✔️ Correct: Consuming food is important for humans, as it provides us with energy and nutrition to keep us healthy and strong. Foods can be consumed raw, cooked, or even in canned form; however, it is important to ensure they are consumed in moderation. ❌ Incorrect: Society is a complex thing, it is made up of individuals and their different beliefs and values. It has a great impact on us, it shapes who we are and how we interact. ✔️ Correct: Society is a complex thing made up of individuals with their different beliefs and values, which have a great impact on us, shaping who we are and how we interact. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Grammar ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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⭐️ Map of The Model Essays 📌 Essay 1: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 📌 Essay 2: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 📌 Essay 3: Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 📌 Essay 4: Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 📌 Essay 5: All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 6: Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? 📌 Essay 7: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? 📌 Essay 8: In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 📌 Essay 9: Companies are responsible only for making money for their investors. Therefore, they should not be held accountable for the environmental and social costs of their business activity to society as a whole. Businesses should do no more than concentrate on making profit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 📌 Essay 10: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? ⚠️ P.S: To be continued ... ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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